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librarywitch
2009-11-01 . chapter 41
OMG that was a wonderfule story. Such a fantastic sequel. Your storyline depth and character development is top notch. Thanks for sharing your talent with us.
kayper54
2009-10-12 . chapter 15
I don't know if this is right place to get a Q answered, but I have to admit that the scene where Harry goes to Malfoy Manor escapes me. I don't know how it happened that Harry discovered that Malfoy knew something about Merton. I've looked as carefully as I know how, but I haven't found any hints or foreshadowing that idicate that Draco knows something. It's possible I'm not reading far enough back in the story; could it even be in Resonance? Doesn't detract from the story at all, but I am curious and would appreciate a hint.
Hope12
2009-09-09 . chapter 41
Brilliant story. enjoyed it alot. just as good as the last one.
mannd1068
2009-08-15 . chapter 41
I loved this story! Thanks for sharing.
gcsm
2009-08-09 . chapter 41
very good fics, moving onto the next one, keep them coming :D
Fremma
2009-08-07 . chapter 41
Your writing is wonderful to read.
gennastar
2009-07-15 . chapter 18
Didn't Snape have a flashback week too?
xEferiellax
2009-06-22 . chapter 41
I like this story ^^ I like both actually. Very good. You've done well so I'm looking forward to the third. i hope harry gets settled down :D And Snape married :D Anyway - cheers!
dracosoftie
2009-06-10 . chapter 41
Another well-woven, masterful story! I enjoyed this one just as much as the first, which is saying a lot. I loved all the twists and turns your tales take - every time I think I might be caught up on everything something else happens! *grins* Thanks for all the hard work and time you obviously put into these stories!

- Bru
LilyJames addict
2009-05-18 . chapter 41
an amazing follow up to your first story. i felt like i was reading an honest-to-merlin book. i think my favorite scene was when snape's house was in flames and harry was coming back and saw snape's devastated face. it seemed to summarize what's happened since the first chapter of Resonance. can't wait to get through Resolution!
Wings90
2009-02-26 . chapter 41
I was pretty frustrated these last few days because I had lots and lots of comments on this story but reviewing was down... oh well. Let me say that you would have a semi-long review for just about every chapter if FFNet let it :) I absolutely loved the story... "Garuda's a giant man-bird who helps the God Vishnu. Flies him around on his back and such." Well, this was absolutely brilliant :) And I hope Harry confronts Vishnu about this, because he behaves like he needs a bit of reassurance that it was him :) But, hey, my thought was that they both did it, neither of them could have done it without the other, both were born into prophecy, so why not? ;) Harry getting a new wand is strange. (btw, wow to Fawkes being Gryffindor... :D ) But it could be good... I also loved the theory that powerful magic makes people's eyes lighter :)
apathetica
2009-02-17 . chapter 25
A few things strike me now that i've got up to where i stopped reading this fic before. I don't know if you are still responding but here it goes: Pamela is like 27ish and Snape and Lupin are 40ish right? Is everyone ok with this?
two sealed closets holding back "dark things" open at the same time- one at borgin's and one in dumbledore's office. Coincidence?
I didn't get the impression from previous chapters that the dreams were at all like what happened in reality- were those dreams "off screen"?
In general: your stories are like an old friend to me. I wish you'd record yourself reading them!
Wings90
2009-02-16 . chapter 15
Harry’s lamentations to him about not ever connecting with someone who could not understand were feeling painfully true at this moment.

Gotta love Severus' sense of humor XD XD
Wings90
2009-02-16 . chapter 14
"Just a general expectation that you would prefer to live closer to your friends." That's stupid... Who cares about a few seconds longer or shorter Floo-ride? I certainly wouldn't... Physical distance between homes in the magical world is nothing, in my opinion.
Wings90
2009-02-16 . chapter 13
But how, how did they get that message in for Harry? And how did they think to force him to charge their ceramic thingies? Or did they intentionally give him so many Sleeping Curses, to get him to open the Dark Plane and get energy from there that way? I'm kinda hoping they're not that smart...
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