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| kpizkool 2007-09-01 ch 1, | abusecool |
| Applecake 2006-08-01 ch 1, | abuseAWW! That was so cute but nevertheless, amusing! ^_^ I can't believe how cute you wrote it! ~Apple-chan~ |
| Yetihunter 2006-07-23 ch 1, | abuseOk personinlaly I thought that it stunk mostly becuase i have never read the tokyo mew stories but I am curious as to see what the sequel will be to this stroy if you make one so I say mak a sequl Animemew |
| RyouandIchigolove 2006-07-09 ch 1, anon. | abuseYAY THAT WOULD BE SO COOL! you have to write a sequel! look at all the ppl who want u to make one!! your a great writer!! great story!! |
| swift-ninja 2006-01-15 ch 1, | abuseYes make a sequal! please! |
| sam 2005-12-06 ch 1, anon. | abuseIn case you didn't knotic, you only have 11 reviews. 12 now. But don't let that stop you! I want the sequel! |
| bobby 2005-12-03 ch 1, anon. | abusehey, it is pretty good |
| spider fairy 2005-09-19 ch 1, anon. | abuseYou should just really update and call the other chapter personality switch guy style. It would be a better title and it would be easier to do. pai;When did you become so intelligent? spider fairy; I was always intelligent but I never showed it to you...captain dorky dic. pai; What did you just call me! spider fairy; oh you mean captain dorky dic. Yes I did call you that. Zakuro; PAI! I need some help with something! spider fairy; Is it a bird! A plane! No, it is captain dokey dic to the rescue! pai; Coming. Zakuro; Hurry! I think it might blow! Pai; hold on I'm coming! spider fairy; tart are you there! Over... tart; copy that I'm in the bathroom and is dorkest prime approaching pretty pomagrante.Over... spider fairy; Yes she is and is that purin, Over... tart; maybe... spider fairy; alright and if you get caught just teleport here and bring me the tape and I will send it on the internet. Over... tart; got it! Over pai; man how am I going to fit this! Zakuro; I (giggle) don't know! You (giggle) said you could and I mean I've seen men do it all the time!! (giggle giggle) Pai; Alright.. tart; this sounds pretty sick and I'm really scared to look through the camera, Over... spider fairy well okay but update over |
| Ashen Jade 2005-09-17 ch 1, | abuseplease make a sequal! please! pretty please! |
| spider fairy 2005-09-17 ch 1, anon. | abusemake Tart switch with ryou and kish switch with pie and keiiricho will be well...keiiricho. well see ya |
| rock-out-kitty 2005-09-11 ch 1, | abuseHahahahahahahahah! That was good, strange, but good. |
| ? 2005-09-09 ch 1, anon. | abuseThats it?! Oh well. I like it, but I wish you will write more. Anyway, Please update! |
| EagleMew 2005-09-08 ch 1, anon. | abuseROTFLHO! That was great. Do the sequal please. |
| spider fairy 2005-09-08 ch 1, anon. | abusepai; i hate you. spider fairy; huh. did u say something? pai; you weren't listening! spider fairy; read my shirt and if you listened you would of known that it said-(happy bunny shirt)it's cute how you think i'm listening. berri; HIYA! spider fairy; oh great the bunny eared freak is back... berri; HEY pai;she doesn't care. spider fairy; huh zakuro; hey spider fairy have you seen my book? spider fairy; yeah sure it's by pai's barney doll. zakuro; pai has a barney doll? pudding and tart;PAI HAS A BARNEY DOLL! ichigo;PAI HAS A BARNEY DOLL! lettuce; PAI HAS A BARNEY DOLL! kish;ZAKURO'S PRINCE HAS A BARNEY DOLL! Pai and zakuro; HEY! Pai;NO I DO NOT HAVE A BARNEY DOLL AND WERE WOULD IT BE THEN! spider fairy; i took it fed it to the dogs and thrn let my dragons flame it and here are it's ashs and i flamed you book of the world thing too and update soon. pai; WHA- |
| testa de cuaderno 2005-09-07 ch 1, | abusemel: YAY! kish: NO! mel: SHUDUP KISH! -kicks him in the crotch- HA! kish:-wimperes- ... -eye twtches- mel: HA!! :) (ps. sound fumiliar? yip! thats right! its ur new pen pal! and I loved this story! please make a sequil! oh and if you would be so kind as to alert me when u have out new chapies or stories... that'd be good) |