I think it's brilliant too...I love the tone of this, I think you made my day. Thank you.

*grins* Can I read the book?

Wow, that was really cool.

I've never even read the story this is an excerpt, i suppose, out of but I think it's 'bloody brilliant'!

I'm thinking that it's pretty good. I like this style of observational writing.

Well aside from the fact that I do not ship either of these pairings, it was good. Aside from this I have little to say, I could find not fault with grammar or tense, the descriptions were excellently done though, and I do belive they were my favorite part. All in all, brilliant.

AW! how sweet!

"Wow, this was random!" But then... I like random.

The Draco/Harry and Remus/Willow pairings were a nice touch.

I would really like to read the background to this, but then you could connect this to One Whole Star... yeah, I could actually see this with that story... cool!

Azar

Okay, Remus and Willow is SO WIERD.

But sweet. Love the H/D.