That is very good. The song fits perfectly!

please.

ive read lots of storys and this one is great

it was only forseen that he would leave anglashia forever not die but it is still good

How depressing! From what you wrote you could actually imagine this happening in the book. How deathly sweet and sad. I give it a major thumbs up! Great work!

Awe, this is sad! I like it though and It's sad too. I really like i t though!