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wandamarie
2009-10-18 . chapter 1
it was a good one thank you it was a thank you for sharing you talents with all of us
Draco Rox Mai Sox
2009-10-07 . chapter 1
Great story! Very in character i think. I liked that Frienze was understanding and such!!
jimmy-barnes-13
2009-08-20 . chapter 1
Very well done, it was very realistic :)
JellyBean404
2009-07-29 . chapter 1
I loved it! Very well written. :)
excessivelyperky
2008-07-21 . chapter 1
Yes, but we know now those boys never _were_ dealt with, even when they nearly killed Snape (and James ended up a hero, and Head Boy, while Snape probably lost more points and got more detentions for almost being killed. Maybe he even had to serve them with his attempted murderer--that is, if Sirius Black was penalized at all). And we saw how much Dumbledore really valued Snape in DH.

A pity Snape didn't have any real friends. It would been awfully nice if he had. Maybe Firenze fetched Snape's body out of the Shack, since it didn't seem anybody was in any hurry to see if he was alive or dead after showing Harry how he had to win the war.

Harry was rescued, of course. He always was.

Nobody ever rescued Snape.

Good story, wish it had been true. But it's clear not even Hagrid cared, or he might have remembered that not all Slytherins are Dark and Evil when talking to Harry.
snarky Beth
2008-03-01 . chapter 1
Beautiful work, absolutly beautiful! It was so realisitic, plausable and emotional. You wrote everything so well, all the emotions and thoughts were perfectly expressed and you did the characters wonderfully. This idea of the event was so brillaint, never read it before, and I wish it'd happened because it helped poor Severus. Excellant job! I wish there was more.
Delaine
2008-02-19 . chapter 1
I like your story very much.
Armaris
2007-07-25 . chapter 1
Very well written...
ShiTiger
2006-08-14 . chapter 1
This was an amazing fic! Firenze and Severus would definately get along well. Though, it would be interesting to see how their friendship develops as Sev grows older.
Catmint
2006-07-14 . chapter 1
This is good stuff. You've got Severus' emotions down really well, and I like how you've developed this from what happened in OotP. I love the interaction with Firenze. Not so sure about the hug, though - I could see someone else hugging, but not Severus.

*beams*
Emilie D
2006-07-13 . chapter 1
Hey,

Your story was recommended to me because I put Firenze into the story I'm writing. I love the way you describe him and his thoughts on centaur society. I like your description of poor young Snivellus too. Good job! :)
Slightly Sinister Sinestra
2006-04-23 . chapter 1
I can see it. Clear as crystal. Absolutely fantastic.
VickiWeasley
2006-03-31 . chapter 1
AW REALLY CUTE I LUV FERENZE HE IS SO SWEET!
Padawan Jan-AQ
2005-12-12 . chapter 1
Lovely one-shot. :) I enjoyed it, captivating.
Viskii
2005-10-09 . chapter 1
Wow, that was nice! I enjoyed it, and I thought you had excellent characterization overall- except maybe the part about Severus hugging him- and your descriptions were nice, too. Good job!

-Viskii :)
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