that fics cool, and thanks for the review on my story, what you get when get involved with Squall, i'll try to update but i can't think of ANYTHING! but i'll try anyway.

Hey, I read your email, you are so nice! Thanks for everything, and yeah, I knew that he was Laguna's son. Just wait what happens as my story progresses. I'm sorry I can't review all your stories, just the ones from ff8, because they're the only ones I'm familiar with, and feel that I can give a good review. Anyway, this story was so cute, you should update soon. It was very original, I haven't read anything like it! God bless!

Interesting ideas so far, keep it up.

This is a really nice story. You captured what it's like being a child very well,and in places it just oozes adorable-ness!

YES! I finally read it. It's an interesting idea and a good point of view to run away from the usual ones. I like it. I just say one more time that you should take a bit more care with the pontuation and such because it can get someone difficult to follow all of it when we don't have "pit stops" so to speak. But all in all not bad. Keep writing ;)

See ya, Reyavie

I think it'd be a good idea to get a beta reader. Your punctuation and other grammatical errors need a little fixing up to make the story better. Specifically with the ""'s.

The chapter seemed kind of unfinished but still, it was a goodie! I'm surprised that Seifer and the others cud understand the concept of "Stay away frm fireworks when they are lit"...but how did they kno how to light one? LOL Seifer always getting punished...Selphie had a diary at such a young age? LOL Hotdogs...well, this was gud and I cant wait 4 an update!

I luv it. cool chapiie...pls contiue...HIHI

OMG totally cool im so jelous ...you are way better then me...anyway keep it up wink wink and your at my favs ^^

Aw, thanks heaps for dedicating the chapter to me! I luvd this chapter. All the characters were portrayed right and I luvd the cute lil Chocobo!! And the name Yelle?? LOL cant wait 4 the next chapter!

Ooh! Cuteness!

I feel so sorry for Zell though...

(sigh) Seifer is such a trouble maker... XD

You should continue writing more stories.. ^_^ hehe...

So cute.

cool story lisa, you could make a series of this

its really cute! U shud update it, u know, have all the lil events they get into while they were at the orphanage. Get Squall in there as well!