 mythica magic 2009-11-19 . chapter 15Yo, its been years since you last updated! Please finnish this story, its so good!x |
 Little Miss Juliet 2008-09-26 . chapter 15Oh...wow...That's...really kinda sad. I liked it! (Well, the story, the sad part was nice, but sad...is well, sad.) |
 Lulu, Neo and Lavender Gaia 2007-04-15 . chapter 1 Hi everyone! I'm Lulu, and I'm Neo, and I'm Lavender Gaia and with our powers combined we suck major dick balls! Together we flame to compensate for our extremely small breasts and fugly fat asses! So remember, next time you do your next bowel movement, think of us:
LULU AND NEO AND LAVENDER GAIA...flamers extraordinaire!!
*if we have flamed you then copy, paste and pass this on...we love spreading our ** around* |
 H4LfAd1ME 2007-03-27 . chapter 15im so glad ur continuing writing!!:D
the plot is getting more intense..i like it(: |
 FallenTeenHearts 2007-03-26 . chapter 15It was an amazing come back chapter!
The emotional level of this chapter was really evened out, with Roy freaking in the morning to him and Richard having some form of a 'bond' over Kori.
Then Kori ending it in a bittersweet note with her family's death.
I really liked it =) |
 Repeating October 2007-02-19 . chapter 15I'm glad you finally updated, it really has been a while ^_^ Well although Dick and Roy seem to have come to that understanding I'm sure there are fireworks yet to come! And I'm sure Kori will be the one to bring 'em! |
 artsydarts 2007-02-19 . chapter 15I love it! It's really exciting and well-written. |
 Amy0192010 2007-02-18 . chapter 15hey whos gravestones were they?? great story soo far...im lovin it |
 milkshakelvr 2007-02-14 . chapter 15oh dear, what did the whisper say, that question sounds stupid but whatever. chapter chapter! :) |
 StarryNightT 2007-02-12 . chapter 15the chapter wasn't crappy!! no where near! i liked the last paragraph with kori and the gravestones ((which i assume are those of her parents)) the best. le sigh i can just see kori picking richard and running after him on her wedding day trying to stop him from moving and declaring her love for HIM not roy ((almost like mary jane in spider-man 2)). well that's what i'm GUESSING will happen anyways and REALLY hoping does cuz it creates the ultimate "aw!" in my mind anyways. i dno't actually know which way your going to go with this story so all i can do is guess.
can't wait for the next chapter!
~shelly~ |
 Mrs. Elphaba Depp 2007-02-11 . chapter 15That's so amazing!! I loved it!! But now I'm really comfused, so you can't wait too long to update next. Please... |
 RobinxStarfireLuvr 2007-02-11 . chapter 15AH! HE CAN'T move! It'll be horrible! Utterly, utterly horrible! LOL! Well, I really liked the chapter! I'm glad that Richard and Roy are finally becoming friends! It's SO great! I hope Kori goes with Richard and NOT Roy! Well, update soon, please! And keep it up! |
 cartoonstar 2007-02-10 . chapter 15this chapter was not crap it was great, please update soon, this story is awesome |
 longhairedhorse 2007-02-10 . chapter 15you can do anything you set your mind to, I've just witnessed actually I knew it all along ;P Great work! Your really open minded in all of your chapters, personally I love realistic stories but I love fiction, Go figure hu. Keep it up! Beers on me XD Awesome job!
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 samuraigurl1213 2007-02-10 . chapter 15Loved the part where Richie got punched in the face. He did deserve it.
-Em |