You know, I always feel that there's a lot of ideas in the Anton-being-Tommy's-Mentor bunny, I like those stories. Also I have a thing for wanting Trent to end up in Tommy's care, hahaha, you got both here, thanks!

Business associations my foot. He's trying to keep Trent away from Mesogog. Awesome job. Catch ya on the flip side.

That was a good idea, but just so you know Trent was actually living at home with Mercer despite the Mesagog thing. Though your solution would have been better lol.

Nice seeing Anton show such concern for Trent. I liked the Mr. Collins tie-in also.

Good chapter. you should continue the story. Put in what Trent thinks and is going through.

ooh interesting...

That was really good. I hope you right more.

The "where does Trent live" question always bothered me too. I thought he stayed with his father anyway though or at the Cyber Space. This makes more sense though. I'd like to see what Trent thinks of all of this too.

Oh, and did you know that you can select which characters star in your story when you edit or put it on the site? In this case Tommy and Anton Mercer (or Trent if you want).

*blinks*

Hey I... never thought of it from that side. Very interesting take on the situation. Just one small thing: there's a bunch of spaces missing, you might want do something about that.

You've almost restored my faith in this site.

(Would you be so kind as to submit it to rosegarden. -along with any other PR or Sentai stories you'd care to house there. :)

This was great. I liked how you had Tommy wondering what was really going on and how much Anton knew. I hope you'll write a second chapter about Trent also.