Oh wow, that was so good. Good's not a good enough word to describe it. It was just amazing. Every once and a while I get in such a Kensuke mood and it's often hard to find good ones, because I'm really picky about Kensuke. You can give me any old Taito and I'll adore it but if it's Kensuke, it has to be really good for me like it. Like this story. I was looking for a Kensuke and then I remembered I read that other fic by you and loved it, so I though I'd come and check out your other stories and I'm glad I did. It was just what I wanted to read. You have a great writing style. Awesome job!

Oh my GOODNESS. That's just so deep and beautiful and compelling. Wow. And wow again. Very, very good, Michelle. Your writing is so awesome. I can't wait to read more of your stuff when I get the chance. - I liked Kensuke before, but now... You've made a total fan out of me. Gosh, that's great. Yay, Shelly!

That was great! I looked down like every three seconds, though. Very good vocabulary and descriptions! I don't know German at all! Cool, I found another Kenshiro fan!

Interesting fic. I am now confused. n_n I got the Japanese, although it could be confusing for others, even _with_ that nice little.. note.. thing at the end. One thing I was wondering at, briefly, was the use of "hayaku"... I'm not sure if that was proper grammar (although, with my grasp of proper Japanese grammar, it likely _was_) when you used it. _; "Onegai shimasu, hayaku" just doesn't sound right.. @_@; I dunno, don't mind me, I'm rambling about words when I should be reviewing!

Very nice job...great inner monologue, very true to Ken. Write more! I really want to see a sequel!

Wai! Very cute! - Although I still think Ken-chan's hair looked better as 'der Kaiser'. Stupid you got me all believing in Kensuke, although I still maintain that Daisuke is an absolute goof. O I'm off to read the Dai' version now! Peace.

*wide eyes* Oh... my goodness... that was absolutely amazing. The wording, the writing... I pretty much went into a *trance* when I read it, and that only happens to me when I read really, really involved, delicate writing that pulls me in. Absolutely *fascinating* and I cannot *wait* for the sequel(s) - you *are* writing a sequel, right? .. Since you entered it in the contest, I can't say much more, but I don't think it's angst. It's really not. Hmmmm... *glances at the categories* It seems more fluffy to me, it really does. Do you mind? Continue, onegai shimasu!

You reviewed one of mine, and one good turn deserves another. The prose is rich, almost too rich. Lots of exotic words for the different colors; luckily, I tend to browse through a thesaurus every now and again, so I knew which ones you meant. The German thrown in could have bothered me, but it didn't. A few corrections on your Japanese, though: It's "urusai" instead of "urasai" and, actually, I've seen the raw, and the term the Erabaresh no Kodomo-tachi (Chosen Children, AKA the DigiDestined) use for the DigiWorld is "Digimon World", in English. (So, it sounds like "dejimon warudo", a bit.) Also, just something to know, "naze" is a very harsh and interrogative form of "why". If Ken is being polite or casual, he would use "dou e" instead. It's appropriate as the Kaiser, and really any other time at which he is very upset, but dou e when he is wondering peacefully to himself, maybe. It's up to you to decide; I just want you to know what your options are. Other than that, lovely fic. I find daiken/kensuke boring for some reason, but this is a definite exception. (Don't know what's the matter with me, I like it in the show . . . maybe it's just that everyone seems to have exactly the same take on it, involving Daisuke's helping Ken through his depression and the two of them having sex. )

I like the word usage and stuff. Excellent description. Orderly, not chaotic like a few fanfics I've seen. ::Shudder.:: No holes. Michelle is a great writer, like Shakespeare. Both I can barely understand at times. Mwaha. ::Hugs Michelle.:: n.n

pretty! Nice use of the German and the Japansese... I approve!

Wow...that was written so beautifully, almost like one of the classics. And the use of Japanese and German somehow made it all the more enjoyable...it's odd, but very very good! I love your work!

DAmn o_o; I like the descriptiveness, and the true-to-Ken style :O YOU GO SHELLY

What to say.. what to say! What haven't I already said, hm? Well, Michelle.. you seriously are the best writer ever. Seriously! Look at how you amazingly wrote this, and it's your *first* full fanfic! I mean, people don't even compare to this on their first attempt.. maybe on their.. Oh.. let's say.. 120-ith, or so? All of your description is breathtaking, and I'm still in awe of the whole story.. Like I said before, I was completely pulled in when I first started reading it, so I was consumed by the whole story all the way through. You have such talent, and I'm totally envious of you for it! ::Turns green:: ;.; Thank you for linking me to this site! Maybe now I've been inspired enough to write something (if I'll ever get off my lazy .. bleep, to do anything!) .. Anyways.. Fantastic job!

Oh. My. Gods. *spits out her hot chocolate* I'm totally speechless. This was just... wow. Wow. ...Wow. Wow! *tries again* It was amazing. The way everything described was jsut beautiful. Better than beautiful. Ken was divine; his thoughts were perfect. And Daisuke was simply adorable. Your writing is astounding; I loved the way the Ken pondered. I have nothing ut praise for this story. Of course you're going to continue... right? Right!