|Reviews for Unwanted Changes|
| JimandArtie4ever 9/1/08 . chapter 1
A great story. I liked the part where Ray was complaining about Stetler.
| Unseen Watcher 8/14/08 . chapter 1
Pity Stetler...briefly. *heh* Very nice family bonding.
| EvilTulip 4/2/07 . chapter 1
Awesome! I'm working on a fishing trip fic myself at the moment (it'll be completely different from yours) but I think yours is better...
| Shining Zephyr 3/30/07 . chapter 1
This was amazingly well-written, and I love anything with Stelter bashed into the head with words. This was taken so nicely. I enjoyed this piece of work!
| Lerrinus 2/4/07 . chapter 1
Nice! Horatio is always good with kids, especially with Ray Jr.
Keep up the good work! :-)
| Rosmarinus 9/7/05 . chapter 1
I think this is great! That fishing trip must have been a good expereince for them and certainly one they both needed.
I'm going to make a suggestion, because this is a very good idea and setting: do some online research into fishing spots near Miami (Biscayne National Park is a natural chocie) and add some more scene description and elborate a bit more on their conversasion. Show us some more of what was happening. Also, your last paragraph is a nice summary. Open it up and continue that line of thought.
I like Ray-Jay and I like that you've given us a glimspe into his thoughts! Very nice
| Sarcastic Realist 9/7/05 . chapter 1
Aw... c'mon, more please? This is good!