oh my god that was so sad i like almost cried. awesome writing

Wow. Truly wonderful. Your writing style is amazing. Please write more stuff--this is just great. You might would want to go back and correct the sister's name for accuracy's sake (it's really Lotte) but other than that, it's beautiful and insightful. Keep up the great work!

Awesome, if i may say!

wow...that was great...

ASword.

Such a sad beginning to the tale.

Excellent! Very well written, and captured the emotions perfectly. Thanks for a wonderful/bittersweet read!

I adore this line:

"That day in Will's hands, despite his best intentions, the family Grimm began to die."

It's beautifully written and it encompasses so much of Will's character. While he often means well, he's got a lot of emotional baggage that gets in the way of showing that he does really care about his family.

This is such a sad piece, and it really gives the sense of a good thing that fell gradually apart. Well-written and almost poetic. I like it an awful lot.

The only small thing that threw me is the last line-- I think your title covers the idea of a genesis all by itself, so saying it in the story is somewhat redundant. Other than that, though, I enjoyed this, and I'd love to see more Grimm tales from you.

I really liked this. You captured the emotion better than I ever could have. Good job.

This is a good story. I love how it's all tied together. You took this and made it into something that rivals many of the "published" authors I've read. Good Work!

that was very good, insightfull. by the way when capitolized in the middle of a scentence Genesis is like the book of the bible, not its is birth or coming forth, and thats what you wanted right?? I liked it a lot, and be happy, even though school is here, *scarlett o'hara eyes* after all tommorow is another day, ok yes that was wierd, forgive me. oh well. keep writing stories.

It was cool. I liked it. There was a lot more emotional resinace in this than the other fics floating around the fandom. I liked the bit about Jake throwing up out of grief and guilt. Vair good.
-chalet

It's interesting... Good... I wish you could've expanded a bit more but :) It was nice. Grammar nice, sentence structure nice... Sorry, nice is such an awful word but I've just woken up and I'm still a bit muddled. I liked it even though it reminded me a bit of an essay... :) Creative- fresh- new...

Oh and... Just for future notice (I'm not sure if you knew) Jake was the older of the two brothers... They don't present it well in the movie but it's true... By about a year. However- because of the way Jacob acts in the movie, it's perfectly logical to assume that Wilhelm was older... *g* I just wasn't sure if you knew. I've got to admit, I'm even twisting it so he's older.

So it's lovely... Keep up the good work...

-Alone Dreaming