Well, well, soldier...

Hoo-rrah! 1º review, btches!

This was nice.
Not a lot happenin' here, true, but it was still interesting.
Shana...Shana...I've heard that name before.
But meh, probably nothin' big. LOL
Kanako's slowly turnin' into a lesbian version of the K-Man. LMAO
And...Anthy's curry...EXPLODED?! Holy CRAP! ROFL

Nice work so far! Keep it up!
Update ASAP! That's an order!

Semper-Fi! Carry on!

Well, well, soldier...

Hoo-rrah! First review, btches!

Now, this was interesting.
Mutsumi-centric. I like that. My sweet, loevly Mutsu-chan...(Happy sigh)
Anyway!
Shin-chan playin' matchmaker? LOL Very sweet.
And NOW I know where Tennyo is from. All thanks to the almighty Wikipedia. LMAO
So, Mutsu-chan and her havin' dinner. Nice.
And yeah, Kit. Very subtle. ROFL

Nice work so far, marine. Keep it up.
Update ASAP! That's an order!

Semper-Fi! Carry on!

I'm seeing the word "Grave" and "Gravely" being used repetitively a bit more discrepant words or none there at all would be better.

You really should have left Ema out of the story she is a **.

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Well, well, soldier...

This was interesting.
Ghost-bustin' makes me feel good. LOL
I dunno if Ayame's from another anime, but meh, it was pretty good.
Kitsune looking like her lover? LMAO And a little kiss. Nice.
And Motoko jealous?! ROFL Now THAT'S interesting.

Keep up the good work, marine.
Update ASAP! That's an order!

Semper-Fi! Carry on!

Shinobu, too? This is getting ridiculous! Motoko's the new Keitaro!

Short, but sweet.

Hahaha...Ema too?

Su, Su, silly Su! So funny, and such a good little spy...

Hahaha...I love it.

Tennyo and Mutsumi, huh? Cool.

HiguraSHI, not HiguraSHU! Ah, lovely...Inuyasha is so funny.

Ah, so Kitsune...I get it now. Hahaha...But I thought Motoko liked Kanako?

Hahaha, nice!

Hilarious! So good.