|Reviews for Fallen|
| Mirria1 1/16/10 . chapter 1
No Vaati! poor Vaati.
| Lady Fai 12/29/09 . chapter 1
| Kailuh727 12/28/09 . chapter 1
I like this story a lot but i think it's weird how Vaati's dad could be Hylian. My question is how that would work?
| Haayls 9/27/08 . chapter 1
This is a great story even for a first! D I love how it sort of tells Vaati's past and makes it short and sweet.
Oh wow! I didn't know you have a Desert Colossus account! I do, as well under the name "Vaati". Actually, I'm not sure if your account is still there. They updated the site not too long ago and deleted alot of members that had none or very little posts. (
| Kenshin's Boo 11/1/06 . chapter 1
lol that was good. i liked it...i was a little confused on who u were talkin about but still...lol :)
| Bolmung 10/26/06 . chapter 1
NO! Vaati can't die! I love him!
| M-Watcher 6/8/06 . chapter 1
Sad... I read the Four Swords manga on the computer and I'm planning on getting the FSA game. I've been to the DC and IZ websites.(Along with a hundred others)
| Badgrl74 4/7/06 . chapter 1
| Meggy 2/27/06 . chapter 1
Such an awsome story... Vaati was evil, sure, but he didn't deserve that...
O, another Manga fan! Awsomeness! And from IndieZelda and Desert Colossus? O_o... THAT'S IT! Favorite Authors listing for you! Those are THE best sites ever!
Hey, wait a minute... You know how the Manga Four Swords ends? What the heck? Where can I find it?
Talk about that later. I'm reading more of your stories! This one was just the greatest!
Red, stop jumping on the couch!
| RedScheherazadeLazarus 11/28/05 . chapter 1
Sup. 'Tis RealSlimShady, aka vaati_girl. I love this story.
| Nooneshereatall 10/24/05 . chapter 1
Wonderful! A true work of art! Very sadenning, but I love it! Poor Vaati... -.-
| Numdenu 10/18/05 . chapter 1
Wow,nice. READ MY PARODY OF MC!
| Marickiya 10/6/05 . chapter 1
WShy would some one flame? I thought it was awsome. Sad though...I liked Vaati. I'm thinking about writing a Vaati POV fic. this was cool. Wish you would write more _
| Capella A. Morningside 9/18/05 . chapter 1
Very well done, in fact I wrote something almost just like it... wowee. I liked your interpretation though... I should really read your other stuff.
| Amme Moto 9/7/05 . chapter 1
_ nice. wish my writing was half that good. _ I should make a depressing one shot for once, you know? lol. I'll add you to my favorite authors list, and then to my author's alerts! we could team up to work on sumthin, sometime...
Poor Vaati! First I bit his foot and then he's dead! T_T ((cries))
I'll stop playin around now. There were some grammatical errors, but who doesn't ever have any of those? _ I liked it though! ((adds))