you need a beta bad your sentence structure and grammar are terrible

Oh my dear,your plot is whole idea is just marvelous and very creative.I have read all your stories and the sequel to this one is do not have enough original saga lines as well are all extremely unsophisticated.I would rework if you are satisfied do however gives me no since of redemption or my mother's child, Sydney Noelle

longer chaps might be a good idea

I presume that the sequel is "Skywalker Family", good that was another fic of yours I was planning on reading.

I really liked this fic, the way everything happened was nice.

And Anakin and Padme got together!

Hmm...While is has been two years since this was finished, I have to say something. This is a good story, but you skipped over to much stuff and left out tons of scenes and details that could have made this even better.

I see there is second part in the works, so I'll head over and give that a chance. I'm hoping the second part has more detailed scenes.

Great Story!

The sequel had better be forthcoming!

great stories! i read all of them except the newest one.

God!

I truly enjoyed this story and I don't think it was rushed. I have seen the movies hundreds of times and this concentrated version worked well for me.

Nice job. Now I'm off to the sequel.

Loved the FF!

Intrigued?

Oh Yeah!

It felt sorta rushed, but I loved the entire concept. I wrote a story like this; THE REALITY OF DESTINY. It's nice to see someone else's version of Anakin getting into the future. Great job!

Um were the conversations between Vader and Anakin in Anakin's head? I'm confused. Anakin and Vader are the same person.

OMG Love you stories I cant stop I have to force myself to stop but words are not enough