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KnightyNight 2008-09-14 . chapter 1
Aww... This was very emotionally beautiful! I love it so much! ^_^
SithKnight-Galen 2006-04-24 . chapter 1
I would like to thankfor giving nother aspect to Dorothy's personality and motives that most people do not even realize, much less think about. I know that she is an Android, seeking t be human, while at the same time seeming to be enthralled with her innate superiority to humans, but I have always wondered what else would lie in the depths of her soul, as well as what truly motivates her. I have always held the opinion that the soul was what your life experiences molded you into and how you learned from them, which holds true even for R. Dorothy Wainwright.

I also enjoy how you touched upon what makes both Dorothy and "Big O" so much more than the other similarly created entities that they encounter. It always seemed that Dorothy and Big O were both a cut above the rest, and the little conversation between the two just confirms that in a way. Thank you.
Ahria 2005-12-03 . chapter 1
I thought that was a very original idea and I really enjoyed reading it.

-Ahria
Paillette 2005-09-22 . chapter 1
Good stuff. You really had a handle on Dorothy, and even through in some DxR stuff for kicks. I wish you'd write more like this.
~P
Ellie 2005-09-14 . chapter 1
If this is what your brain produces to study for classes, I hope you enroll 24/7... XD XD Just kidding.
Nah, but I really did enjoy this story. I like the way the reader has to guess at what Big O says from context, and how the last comment is a secret until the end (when I read it, I promptly reread the beginning to understand it better).
Anyway, even though your story doesn't have a lot happening in it, plot-wise, I think it gives a rather nice glimpse into the characters.
Kesy 2005-09-13 . chapter 1
Really nice story! I loved it!
Zola1 2005-09-08 . chapter 1
This was marvelous and I enjoyed it very much. The last two lines brought it all together.
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