A lovely story! I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. Great writing.
I think I loved most Ronon in this story.. although I'm a die-hard McKay follower.. LOL
Lots of stars!

aw, the ending was so sweet. I loved this story. The idea that Rodney got sick from something way before Atlantis and only lived because he got sent to rotten places like Russia is really quite clever and cool :P

Loved your story. Very entertaining and detailed. I had to take out my dictionary for the last two chapters, as the vocabulary continued to grow. (smile)

This was, as always, well-written, engaging, with a neat plot twist. I love the fact that SHeppard figured it out!

"Beckett heard, later, from his head nurse. Wading through records, he was not surprised to find out that Sheppard had flown the coop. He had evidently been aided and abetted by Zelenka, and a purloined wheelchair."

Loved this paragraph. I could totally get a mental picture of Beckett's exhasperated thought process. Gotta love how Zelenka "aides and abetts."

Great story!

Enjoyable read. Thank you for writting it.

Awesome! I love all the twists the story had and the John/Rodney friendship ^^ Cool story!

This was fantastic. Great plot, in character, excellent mystery and resolution. I particularly liked the way you followed the whole team. Some excellent scenes with Dex. Good job!

I still absolutely love this story, a wonderful McKAy whump/team fic. :-D It was particularly interesting to re-read after seeing Critical Mass. ;-)

Please pick up the Goa'uld spy plot! This is great.

This is a great story with a clever, and thoroughly plausible, plot but concentrating on the character interactions that are the heart of story. I think you give a depth to Dex that I haven't read anywhere before either. I love your stories.

Very nice and well written. I love your discriptions of what everyone is thinking, it's very true to the characters. Over all great job! Love the ending too, very touching.

you whump mckay like no one has whumped before, first torture in fortitude and now in disease! by all means carry on, i want to see what you do him next because you do it so damn well. you dont just whump him you give him emotion so the reader isnt feeling sorry for a cardboard cut out of their favourite character. you put mckay on paper so well. keep doing it!

Loved this story, especially the ending :o)

*standing ovation* Aw! Loved the ending! Rodney's just a big ol' softy hehehe

So, was the whole goa'uld thing just a red herring or...and this could just be wishful thinking...do you plan on writing another fic where you explore possible spies infiltrating Atlantis *hopeful expression* :D

Great job with Ronon! Loved the scene with him and Teyla and his introspection during his walk around Atlantis...very well done and very in character..for as much as we know about his character anyway LOL :D