Very good story. I liked your ideas and how everything worked.

One thing that I don't like and will keep me from reading the sequel, you constantly changing the POV. I kept having to scroll back up to find out who was talking to who. I read countless fanfictions and it's the first time I had so much trouble following the narrative.

You have a great writing style, well above the usual for fanfiction. It's really just the way you chose to do things and not how badly you messed up that turned me off. I'd read a normal POV story from you any day of the week!

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Wow.
You just took me on so much of an emotional rollacoaster xD
This is definitely one of my favourite stories, for sure.
I don't think there's one bad thing about it [cept the Xander thing, and that isn't that bad coz he's happy]
But seriously, really really amazing job. Seriously, wow.

Wow. I think you've just blown me away, lol. Wow.
I love how you managed to link everything from the actual series to Emma and the plot to this story, it's amazing.
Really really awsome job.

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Amazing chapter. Really amazing. So sad though. I wish we did get to say goodbye to people like that, but like Joyce said, it's human to want more time.
Anyway, Really really amazing job, not only with this chapter but the whole story.

Aw, I miss Xander and his wise cracks at innapropriate times.
Love Andrew though, your 'version' seems more grown up and mature, i like it (:
Very awsome job. Really love this fic. Great job.

Very interesting. (: I have a few theories about this, but I'll just read and see if i'm right tehe.
Really really kick ** job. Really.
=D

Wow.
Your imagination seriously amazes me, wow.
Really awsome job.

Wow!
Lovin' this story too much. It's like...exactly what i wanted to happen after Chosen. I've sort of blocked out the comics [even though i love comics xD]
So yeah..awsome job!! Really really great

Wow...I've got to say that I've thoroughly enjoyed this story. It had comedy/angst/romance that was incredibly well integrated.

Especially liked the ending that brought a smile to my face.

Well written!

ah i LOVED this story. so sweet...i'm glad they have a happy ending and that everything's okay. this was very very enjoyable for me to read, loved it!

this was so sweet...i loved how you had isabella and joyce and tara come meet them! so satisfying.

aw! aw to faith and buffy in bed, aw to faith and buffy talking about their past loves and losses, aw to joyce in buffy's dream...i can't wait to read what she has to say to them

oh wow...poor faith...i knew she was hiding something. that's horrible...i hope buffy will understand and give her a break...

Emma is kind of like Faith was...only less blustery...lol. I'm still really enjoying this (shower scene was sweet, lol)

i'm still loving this story...i like how you had faith and buffy connect with emma together. and i also like how you have buffy and faith behaving with each other now- the chapter where they first made love was so sweet. very well written