great idea, would make a good sequal. i dont watch the show but from what i read in the fanfics this is sounds like something that would happen.

I LOVED it. I absolutely adore stories which have a beautifully rendered surprise twist in the end. Write more.

at first I was sure it was buffy I mean joyce was the last one to cross my mind, but yea I could see that happening, it likey she was really dead and spike thought he could fix her, but she gone and nothing can bring mommy dearest back

LOTS OF LOVE KAT

Oh! That was so sad! Spike was sweet...in a morbid way. Read it a few times on bsua and it still makes an impact every time. Love it.

Joyce? huh? I am confused. Otherwise, it was great.

woah...that was so sad. interesting twist! but still, wow...that was GREAT!

Omigod this is so sad!