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| JadeAlmasy 2008-07-24 ch 22, | abuseAweosme ending! i cant wait to read the Sequal!! Omg i cant wait!! Jade |
| TaintedDarkInuShemeeko 2008-07-24 ch 22, | abuseI story was very interesting indeed. Please let me know when you post your sequal, if and when you do. Thanks. Blessed Be, TaintedDarkInuShemeeko |
| DracoStarbo 2008-07-23 ch 22, | abuse...WOW! That was AWESOME! You HAVE to write the sequal! There's abosolutely no way you're leaving it like that! I wanna know more about this Chris - how he got to be this way. And how Wyatt's going to fix this. Please, please, please, please, please write the sequal! Looking forward to your next fic, -Starbo |
| MargotTenn 2008-07-18 ch 22, | abuseGotta tell you that I actually am really impressed by how well you explained the time-situation. Time travel is mindbendingly confusing, but you really explained enough to make me interested but not so much that I felt like I was sitting through a lecture on theoretical physics. I also love how you made me feel really sorry for Wyatt but, somehow, at the same time, kind of amused. It was so sad to have him face that things aren't fixed yet (and even are worse) but it was also funny to see him struggling with Clarence. You also showed how much he missed/needed Chris - to chime in with the witty comments, or just to be another brain understanding things. And FANTASTIC job intrigueing me for whatever sequal is coming. I mean you've really fascinated me - I have all of these possible theories buzzing around in my head (about what's going to happen, what happened to Chris etc) and I am so excited for later. I thought the "curio cabinet" comment from Chris was great - it was such a "Huh? What does he mean?" moment for both Wyatt and the audience - both prosaic and completely nonsensical. I can't wait for whatever's next (even though I'm one of those people who puts the Truth Hurts ... as my favorite story of yours). |
| Girl version of Chandler 2008-07-17 ch 22, | abuseI love this story! When are you going to write a sequel? |
| whitelighter1389 2008-07-17 ch 22, | abusewow that was a great update and a really great story it was really interesting and i really enjoyed it |
| History Buff 1990 2008-07-17 ch 22, | abuseWow, great ending, really great ending. I can't wait to see this sequel you mentioned, just what the hell are they about to get up to on this little trip? What will they see, and most importantly, what will they change? I just hope it won't be another 3 years before we all get the answers we need, never mind Wyatt, lol. Anyway, well done, this is a really good piece of fanfic and you should be very proud of yourself. Most people would have given up on something like this long before now but you didn't, for that you probably deserve an award of some kind, lol. Seriously, I can't wait to see what else you have in store. Please post the sequel as soon as you can, take care. |
| goddessa39 2008-07-17 ch 22, | abuseHmm. Just read the whole thing. I loved the Chris/Bianca hints and hope for more. So many people dislike them but I think they're great. Story wise I think they all need a little clue, but it's going great. I'm looking forward to the sequel. |
| guardian music angel 2008-07-17 ch 22, | abusethis was so good! plz do a sequel! |
| lizardmomma 2008-07-17 ch 22, | abusevery good job, I can't wait to see what happens in the sequel |
| piper-rox 2008-07-17 ch 22, | abuseFantastic! I've been waiting for this for ages:) I would love to read a sequal or bonus ending:P Please write again soon:D |
| angel74 2008-07-17 ch 22, | abuseThat can't be the end. There has got to be more. You better write a sequel! Please... |
| moony391 2008-07-16 ch 22, | abuseWow. This ending sucked. In a totally, I cannot wait for you to write the sequel way. But, as endings go it wasn't very ending-y. Still amazing though. ~moony391 |
| The Silver Fallen 2008-07-16 ch 22, | abuseAHH.Lovee. LOVE. Have I reviewed for you before? I can't remember, and that's sad enough. But since almost the beginning, I've kept up with you. This story has kept me on the edge of my seat since, and I commend you for that - it's a feeling I enjoy. Now that this part is over, and so... hanging, that feeling is really really punctuated. I can't wait for this sequel you've practically promised. Are you even on my favourites? Gah. Have to check that now too. But you're worth it, and fully deserve it - especially for this story. |
| WHYBENORMAL93 2008-07-16 ch 22, | abuseOh good ending...can't wait to read the sequel ^,^ |