...that's really something.
Very good, indeed. XD

... Whaaaattttt? XD

Well... That was... unexpected. Jack's aim certainly improved as a half-ghost. I thought it was Danny and Co. all grown up at first. I'm guessing Maddie and Jack don't plan on getting married. But it was cool to see the three of them still such good friends. Great job!

Cynthia

I had to reread this twice before I could properly [or whatever I might call this] review. The first time I merely sputtered incoherently. The second time my brain shut down. That's a twist I really never saw coming

Okay... That's just a little creepy...

Penelope, over and out!

Wow. This is incredible. But...Jack Phantom rather than Jack Plasmius. *shify eyes* Ah well. Canon bending is all good when you've got a good enough excuse.

I love you. And I agree with Rain the Revenant - this needs a follow-up! Maybe a crossover with the non-AU?

*snorts* i'm surprised i haven't gotten iron poisoning from the things that i read. -_-

cheers,

brittney

Ahahahaha! XD

So is this meant to take place in an AU, the past, or both?

This is good I really like your work hope we can be friends:)

OK? That's just freaky. I had to reread that part at the end to get what was going on. Imagine if that REALLY happened.

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BUNNY

I've never seen this sort of thing before! Wow...

O.o

I had to read it twice to be sure that I wasn't losing my mind. Wow. Jack... Phantom... yikes.

So... I'm guessing he has a reason to blather on about ghosts now.

That was rather good. I didn't like it quite as well as your poem Temptation, but that is probably because I am biased to likeing the Danny, Sam, and Tucker tio. Was this in an alternate timeline or something? You really are a talented writer. I liked the story.

*grins* Awesome. I didn't catch on to the different people until the end! I only can ask this one question: How did this group come to be?