Danny has a little too much fun sometimes, in the course of his duties. The phrase "misplaced aggression" comes to mind...

Wow, I've never read a pantoum before. Cool. Good job.

Your meter is perfect - all I can do is try. Seven syllables a line? I'm just...

You can tell Danny's really tired, and the driving rhythm of the poem does imply it. Thanks for the 'Danny Pantoum' thing, I'll be using it a lot from now on. XD

Scribere jussit amor.

-KorelC-

Woah - cool. I've never heard of this style of poetry before. I agree with you - it fits Danny, and it was well written. I like it!

this is really good... continue on with these poems!

Eep! Danny's despair and tiredness sound out load and clear.

WAI! I love it when the good guy gets a little off-balanced in the head. :X Their physical and emotional pain makes me feel warm and fuzzy inside.

(watches a .gif of Ed getting pounded into a tree over and over again)

Poor Ed... :/ Er, Danny. Both. Bah.

Lord help me, there is too much Yu-gi-oh shounen-ai on my computer...

ERZLO

I've always liked villanelles, cause once you'v written the first stanza, you,like, half done. ;) Anyways, very captivating, it truly does fit Danny

This one was good. I liked the way it flowed.

KatrinaKaiba

This was good really good, it's hard to write pantoums,I've job

This was a good poem. Adios.