Ever wonder why Jazz was so enthusiastic at the beginning of Secret Weapons - and how close they came to disaster?

Waiting can definitely be worse than doing.

Nice. You're really knowledgeable on the types of poems.

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BUNNY

You know, rhymes like these - the really GOOD ones, that is - can describe a situation so well and yet can be used for so many people, not just for the ones it's meant for. That's what *I* like about it.

Very good poem! I think it characterizes Jazz perfectly. Can't wait to see what stories you come up with next!

one piece of advise... at the end i would put cannot instead of can't i think it just fits better don't you think?

You *really* made me feel for Jazz.

That. Was. Brilliant. I want to cry, 'cept I'm in my school computer lab, and that would be awkward. But really, that was good.

that...was...beautiful {Cries}

ilikedan

Ep! Let me first tell you that I HATE hate hate hate most poems with a blinding passion. This one though was fanfreakingtastic! I loved the part about heroes falling and the last 2 lines? Kick Ass. This one is going in my c2. "shakes head" I can't believe you got me to like a poem.

...woh, amazing.

You write great poetry, though I admit I prefer the stories.

I can't decide which is better: your fiction or your poetry. This is truly, professionally, thoroughly magnificent. Not a single line or word I didn't like. This is a poem that gets better every tiem you read it. Another masterpiece.

This was cute. I liked this sonnet. It was really cute.

KatrinaKaiba

That was great. I love so many things you've writtin, but that is definatly one of my favorites. It's awesome to see a poem done in Jazz's point of view because 1, there arn't really any poems done about her, and 2, because she's one of my favorite characters. :P

That was beautiful. You are now one of the 20 or 30 people on my favorite authors list. Adios.