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| HyperSquishy 2005-10-08 ch 11,  | abuseAw! That was so sweet! You gotta love Greg! |
| AmberKyep 2005-09-25 ch 11, | abuseYAY! Cute ending, I like it. Smiling so big right now. Can't wait for the next story. YAY! |
| Kurama13 2005-09-25 ch 11, | abuseAwesome story! |
| michelaski 2005-09-25 ch 11, | abuseMega cute ending...and I totally agree with you...this is a great ending. Loved the entire story...curious as to what you might write next...anyway, awesome job! Later! Michelaski |
| ibreak4CSI 2005-09-24 ch 11, | abuse*squeals happily* Yeah! I loved this fic so much!! Sweet ending. Looking forward to another fic from you soon! |
| Me Oh My ITs Zoe 2005-09-17 ch 10, | abuseYAY warm fuzziness! I hope u update soon!! |
| michelaski 2005-09-17 ch 10, | abuseAw...so cute! Definately another one of the better chapters. Great work and I can't wait for the next one. Later! |
| Linwe Melwasul 2005-09-17 ch 10, | abuseHm...to tell you the truth, the plot seems a bit old. A new CSI comes to the lab, she has secrets, get abducted, and everyone's happy in the end. The character seems a bit Mary-Sue-ish, but she's alright. The story on the whole is decent, but a bit slow. It's also a bit annoying how everyone likes her and yadda yadda. I hope you don't take this as a total flame because the story is alright. I hope you take this into consideration when you start a new story. |
| ibreak4CSI 2005-09-17 ch 10, | abuseHehe. Sweet! *grins* More soon, please? (I am hoping this will work again, I said please!) |
| Kurama13 2005-09-17 ch 10, | abuseAw that was sweet. Can't wait for more. |
| AmberKyep 2005-09-17 ch 10, | abuseAw...cute and adorable. I love cute and adorable. I love this story so much, as always great job and updsate soon. please |
| Kurama13 2005-09-16 ch 9, | abuseI love this story! please update soon. |
| AmberKyep 2005-09-15 ch 9, | abuseYAY! Oh I feel so very bad that I didn't review last chapter, which was totally awesome by the way! YAY! Love it love it love it Please update soon. My thanks and gratitude. And my friend liked it too even though she only read this one chapter. So that's major bonus points. Much love. And a reminder to update son! Please. :D |
| ibreak4CSI 2005-09-15 ch 9, | abusehehe. great chapter, more soon, please! |
| michelaski 2005-09-15 ch 9, | abuseI know...the ending was really sad, but all in all, it is a good book. Ok, onto chapter...excellent and funny. I like Catherine's line about chocolate...I love chocolate! All in all, this chapter happens to be my favorite so far. Looking forward to the next one, Later! |