aww, cute and sweet ^^

Nice emphasi of the hat.

Aw! That was cute! Well done!

Aw...this is so well done, the fluffy was moderate and to the point. Its really sweet, and Luffy was just OCC enough to allow some romance in there..great job

o_o the best damn filling-between-plotpoints fic i've ever read! and the best part is it's entirely believable!

Superb. Sp? But anyway, i love the alters between reality and Namis's fever induced dreams. It was really neat!
Signed R.H.

Cuteness!

^_^ I loved this arc. This fic is cute!

Aw, kawaii. What am I saying, aah, my mind! Just kidding! It was good. But next time, try to space out the drabble a bit more. Just because it's a short LxN piece of work doesn't mean you should neglect the basics.

I wish that scene between Luffy reassuring Nami to be well had gone a little farther. I was further more surprised and amazed that it was HE who carried HER to the doctor on Drum Island's mountain even though Sanji, who we all know would have loved to have done the same would have carried her. Luffy was the strongest of the two at the time and if it had been Sanji carrying Nami, he would have made quick work out of the animals! Now that is what what I call an obvious LuNa moment!^-^

I love it!! It is so sweet!!

kawaii! make more!

Aww real cute! I love it^^ its just what I imagined^^ and one of the best LxN stories ever!

Aw that was soo sweet && kawaii, I loved it. ^-^

Poor Sanji... but yay for LuNa! ^_^

YAY for LuffyXNami!
(I dislike Sanji...)
o, and kudos to you too!!