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| MysticSorceror 2008-07-16 ch 1,  | abuseThings I liked: I love your writing style Excellent character interactions Aww cute Kyoru scene! Ryou sounds so adorable! A bike basket! Kawaii! They go poof? XD It's pretty sweet how you see Kyo as a kitty - poor Kyo-kun but this part does inspire me Aww Tohru must be so flustered Ways to improve: Spacing mentioned in other reviews Totally adorable, wonderful work ~Myst Things that I didn't like: Dislike author notes within that actual story text |
| silver mist cloud 2006-10-25 ch 1, | abuseAhh,Kawaii. So cute. You do Kyoru just as well as Yukiru. Just less fluff and mush like Kyo's personality.Keep it up all of you girls. |
| kattygirl32132 2005-10-28 ch 1, | abusei like your reasons for writing this; it's a change of paise. I still like it! |
| twilitprincess 2005-09-18 ch 1, | abuseThat was so cute! I love Kyo, nekos are the best! I think it could've been longer, though. |
| Joskers 2005-09-10 ch 1, | abuseTHat was a really good story. but I think you can add to it a little. Don't you? |
| Blackened-Ashes.Remnants-of... 2005-09-09 ch 1, | abuseIs it just a coincidence that the other kitty was named Ryou or was it from TMM? Oh and by the way coolio story! Nekos are so kawaii! |
| Creyhie 2005-09-09 ch 1, | abuseIt was really cool. I really liked it. For someone who likes...Yuki...your really good. (If your wondering, I LOVE Kyo. Yuki's ok, though! ;)) |
| silveryuki06 2005-09-09 ch 1, | abuseim only reviewing this cuz i rpomised u i would n ure one of my bf's...i dont ylk kyorus..*whines* im not evn gonna TRY n write one, but i admire u 4 writing this...yup!! much luv always! silver-chan |
| Aria-chan09 2005-09-09 ch 1, | abuseAw! I wuv it foreva and eva! So Kawaii!! ~really loves this type of stuff right now for some...odd...reaosn... lol!~ Great and UBER SUPER JOB! |