again i have to say u r a great writer and there should be a contation 2 this

Wow, this is really good! it seems like it should be a proluoge to some thing. oh, maybe you could write more. That be frickin awseome!

o yes i agree with you, it does seem suspicious, the whole 'snape killed dumbledore thing' there's got to be more to it than that, there always is! I like the references to Draco and Snape, and how even the Slytherins don't just jump into something unless they know that they'll be able to make a difference, while still keeping their lives. Very true.

That's a really interesting take on things. I only have one real criticism: It's hard to tell why this character is in Slytherin at all. What personality traits does this girl possess that made the Sorting hat put her in Slytherin in the first place? I think you should maybe make that a little more clear. But otherwise, nice work.

And hoorah for Slytherin girls! I myself am writing a fic about one.

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Loved this monologue, I hate how people can stereotype everyone for their clothes, their families, in Harry Potter the stereotype is on the house, I hate it when its like that! I mean there has to be some good slytherin out there, people just dont like to talk about them. I personally think that Snape is still loyal to Dumbledore, I'll never forgive him for killing Dumbledore, but I'm certain there was a reason to it! And Draco was going to join the goos side! if the death eaters hadnt come in, in that moment! I do Hope everything turns out good even for one slytherin

Nah, I don't think that you should continue with this. It's really good as a one-shot. Slytherin House doesn't have all bad witches & wizards, I agree with you completely. But hopefully, Draco will go to the good side during the final battle.

Good thinking. There have to be some decent Slytherins - after all, cunning, of good family and utterly ruthless sums up most of the great heroes. Where would you put Flashman, Quatermain, Vorkosigan, Fitzhugh et al? Not in the suicidally brave, or the ridiculously smart. Undoubtedly at least one Slytherin will wind up fighting for the good guys when the Final Battle arrives, probably two or three. If you want to see a Slytherin with more style than all the rest put together, on the right side and absolutely hilarious, check out BlueEyesAtNight's 'Diary of a mad Black fan: A Sirius Lover' - warning that it's rated R, don't drink anything whilst reading unless you want it all over your keyboard.

I hope that you will continue on with this. It's an interesting story.