This is absolutely great. Thanks.

Whoa, that was really good! O.O The description and last words of the story was awesome. *nods*

Perfect portrayal of a man in shock. Wow, this was awesome.

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Krys

Poor Rodney, we can see inside. This is very good.

Wow. Well done. Very heavy and disturbing but a well-captured Rodney and a wonderful description of what we so often don't see: the after-effects of having to kill a person. Great work.

A little Twisted and creepy but interesting.

Good, atmospheric character piece, with, I think, some very realistic introspection.

Awesome atmosphere.

The Carter reference just took my breath away - so poignantly placed.

Thanks.

That was so sad. Wonderfully done. Paints such a dark grey of feeling and numbness.

Very sad, though, almost hopeless but not quite there yet which leaves a flash of hope for the charaters.