Reviews for His Deepest Secret

Reviews For: His Deepest Secret

aPeurDeFISH1412 2008-02-28 ch 1,	abuse... How confusing. But very well written ^_^ Who would have ever thought of that pairing? Of course I would have never figured that out... haha haha. But, using the reverse to find clues... yes, only Jodie would actually use Cool Kid, and probably Shuu. The bottle of sherry would have been from that case when Heiji and Conan were inspecting Jodie, and Jodie requested a bottle of sherry during the experiment. Quite interesting. :]
Mizu no Tori 2007-09-16 ch 1,	abuseJodie and Heiji? Alright I cheated! I took a look at the characters section, happy? But it's still unusual. And unusual is refreshing.
Kari and KyonKyon 2007-06-04 ch 1,	abuseMy hat off to you. This is definitely on the oblique side. It wasn't until I inventoried the other people in the room in the Discover Jodie case that I realized who the narrator had to be. In this case, eliminating the impossible definitely came up with the improbable. But that was the whole point, wasn't it, ne?
CSMars 2007-06-03 ch 1,	abuseuhh... so this is jodie and shinichi, right? But I'm confused, why is he keeping a bottle of sherry to "remind him of her?" Also, Jodie doesn't seem like the kind of person to just leave quietly (which is fine at first I thought it was Ai), she seems to me to be a loud, party-'till-we-drop kind of person before leaving.
Fredryck 2006-07-15 ch 1,	abuseWow, that was fun! So this girl is not Ai but Jodie, lol... I really can't imagine a Jodie/Shinichi pairing, that's why I found it so funny :D!
icecreampie 2006-03-03 ch 1, anon.	abuseok...is the one he's pining away for...jodie?! she seems to be the only one to fit the bill here... but that's just...weird... and "greet cool kid, angel and your sweet girlfriend..." has he found a new girlfriend?
RanMouri82 2005-09-13 ch 1,	abuseNice story, and a nice depiction of a guy pining away without admitting it to himself. While a lot of pregnant hints were dropped, I still cannot figure out who you're writing about. Jodie Saintemillion's the only one who would use the name "Cool Kid", Shiho would no longer go by the name "Sherry", and Ran would only refer to either her father or Shin'ichi as being home or away, though neither of them would likely turn up in Paris. Mystery builds interest, but this is almost obscure. Please reveal the main characters' names at the end of each story! This will reward the reader who endured the suspense until the end. Better yet, maybe lead the reader to think it's one pair of characters, then conclude with the surprise that they're completely different people. Again, great job! Loved the reference to specific locales like the Charles de Gaulle airport. Keep writing!
SN 1987A 2005-09-09 ch 1,	abuseOk, that was weird (not you or the story). FFnet told me this story wasn't part of the archive and cannot be reviewed, and well, I'll try again. It's sad to see Shinichi keeping a bottle of Sherry... :( But why did Ai end with "Sherry and me" at the end of the letter? It's a sweet but sad piece. And why New York? A lot of people, if they write about Ai going away, they pick New York. I don't really understand why except that maybe it's the only American city that appeared in the manga during the Golden Apple case.

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