  charmed-darkangel 2008-04-04 . chapter 2gr8 stry ud asap |
| Writer of all 2005-11-30 . chapter 2 Nice job dam Elders I never liked them at all.
Anyway this is the same Melineda the Piper saw when they went to the the future right? I was just wanted to make sure cause thats who I keep saying be she older.
Great job again and thanks for updateing please keep it up. |
| MsHellFire2005 2005-10-06 . chapter 2 Interesting plot. no one that I have seen before. I look forward to your next chapter |
| magicspromise89 2005-10-04 . chapter 2 Great story. I can hardly wait until you update. It is a very original concept. I love how you're taking the daughter Piper saw in the future and making her real. Keep it up! I'll be waiting earnestly for your next chapter. |
| future consequences 2005-09-09 . chapter 1 Totally cool. I love it. Update soon. |
| Writer of all 2005-09-09 . chapter 1 Well I think its good, Melinda hin well its sounds like great idea. I say RAN WITH THIS STORY! It can get ever better I think. If you want any help let me know by e-mail I would glad to help. Keep it up and have writing this if you decide you want to keep going that is. |
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