Ooh, I loved it! I believe that, with all the crap he's had to put up with, Naruto did have to have some moments of angsting. You kept him in character (at least I think so) and showed a side of him we don't get to see too much in the anime or manga. I really liked the ending because I can see him doing something like that.

Ok.

First things first: I really like this piece. It was well written, and the imagery very up to standards.

Now.

About your summaries. If you scroll to your stats and see how many hits your stories have been getting, it might explain why such a story as this only has three reviews. Summaries on ff don't necessarily have to be summaries. They're kind of, sneak peeks, to get readers interested. If you hadn't faved me I would never have opened this story and read it just because your summary is very dry.

/ . . . But then I saw it, eyes filled with endless sorrow, and I turned back to face my pain.”/ Naruto angst drabble.

Something like that would have worked.

Not that I think this is angst...but whatever.

Did you make that up? That quote? If you didn't I would like to use it, but if you did, then, well, of course I wouldn't...either way I'd cite you and stuff, but that's perfect for a story I'm planning...

Luvs. I'm faving this story.

loved it...for a good long second, i'd thought you might kill him off...

I like! Angst in appropriate dosesme happy! and you definitely didn't lay it on too think, for which I thank you muchly!

I really liked this. I liked trying to figure out who you were talking about and I'm glad to say i was able to figure it out _. It was good. I rather liked it. Short but that's not always a bad thing. In this case it was actually a good thing. tee hee. Yup yup... very good... keep it up and all those other nice things your ment to say in these good review things _ ja mata ne _