Oh SNAP! Rinoa is going to be in SO much trouble! Nice story. I enjoyed reading it. Hope you update soon.

i know that you havent update in a very long time... but what i had read it seems a really nice story...please try tu update..please!
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okay, weird but good! Keep up the good work!
-rinnyheartillyizawesome

O-K-A-Y! Squall's the one preg? Weird! But i luv ur stories so much i guess...wait...I WILL READ IT!

mhm..i like this story...very..interesting..when ya gonna update? soon?

x..x If you're gonna make an mpreg.. O.o Why can't it be Shounen ai? Those are more fun. =] But it is good. o.o Just replace Rinoa with Seifer or Zell or someone. XD Lol, ha ha, jk. =] Just seems more common for an mpreg to be with shounen ai couples.

barf, what a dumb story. a guy, squall no less getting knocked up cause of rinoa. that's dumb to the next level.

Great story! Please update soon! Adds to favs:)

ooh i'm intrigued. Do update soon.

So why did she do it to him, huh? *wink* I think you're off to a good start. I noticed that you wrote "unpredictable" when I think you meant to write "predictable." It didn't bother me, nor distract me from the story, it was just something that I noticed. I hope you don't take me pointing it out negatively. I know that with my own writing I hate it when I miss something and no one tells me and it goes uncorrected for a while. When I finally notice it, it's like "Why didn't someone tell me about that?!"
I really enjoyed your opening and I'm looking forward to reading more. I do hope you update soon. I'm adding this to my alerts.

yay mpreg! ... THATS IT?!?!?!?! "I hope he can understand why I’ve done this to him." that's IT?!?! OMG OMG OMG NO NO NO NO!! PLZ UPDATE!

Aww. This definitely has potential. Poor knocked-up Squall. You know, it's weird, but I think you and me may be the only two people out there who write mpreg with a heterosexual pairing. ;) Can't wait to see more of this.
*added to my alert list*

This is to be promiseing. I hope to read more of this. I'm putting it on my favs list, I don't know why I like these but hey it's what I like! ^_^

great chap, keep up with all the hard work and update soon.

I love it, as usual...I'm so looking forward to the next chapter...*is too new to have read any of the originals*

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