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You mean "determined". :D

This was pretty cute. Something just a little different, and hey, it turned out well.

(By the way, I think Fire Emblem is pretty much the only (or ONE of the only) categories that can make the "random" pairings possible. Most anime and TV shows can't do it. Fire Emblem can make even the most odd pairing real...and I love that.

Cheers,
-Manna

i loved this fic, i really did. no flaws at all with the characteriation and you captured Florina's true spirit beautifully. None of that she's a twittering pansy without a spine or brain. I always appreciate fics that give Sain a chance to find love because he's one of my favorite characters. woot!! my only question is if it;s supposed to be "You're lovely," he said, instead of "You're lovely," He said. But that's a minor thing. lol after all's said and done. very nicely done.

Yay! Fluff! now hurry up and finish your other one!

Sain is such an idiot for denying her when he could've jammed his lips onto hers! It seems that the normal and hopeless sain that i know wouldn't turn a girl down!

wow...i would have never thought this kind of pairing would work but i guess opposites DO attract...
it was really cute too!!
i luv florina for her shyness but i'm a firm believer that being shy is not a weakness; its a strength!
good job!
~keaira19

Aw... this was nice.
"Everyone. You are the woman afraid of men, and I am the man who loves women."

Hehe. Funny. Yes, that is what everyone would say.

A Sain/Flo oneshot...interesting, to say the least. It's a good story, but a oneshot isn't usually the best way to write this pairing. Your other Sain/Flo fic uses the passing of time to let their emotions develop, but there just isn't enough room in a oneshot to develop their characters. It's still a good story, very well written.

I loved this! It's going to my favourites! Brilliant, and oh so fluffy. I especially like how the ending mirrors the beginning, and, of course, Sain's speech! ^_^

I'm glad you added some of Sain's motivations at the end. Some authors would have just skipped in in POV fic like this but you didn't well done.

I thimk you used the feelings they portrayed in the game quite well.

Overall, a great story.

Aw...i liked that! it was sweet and innocent. I;m gonna put you on my fave authors list because i like the way you write. It;s descriptive and when in 1st POV, you really capture the character's personalities. i hope to see more! ^_^

florina so is not my favorite, but i just love the sain/florina fics. i think they're my favorite couple right now.

I love you for writing this! I just wanna give you a big hug! I would have reviewed sooner, but alas, I had computer troubles in Europe and internet troubles in my dorms...and then school...but I loved this one-shot! After a tough day at school it was nice to come back to my dorm and read something like this. You're a very good writer...keep it up...I'm really happy you support this pairing! ^^

Although I'm writing a Sain-centric fic, I love Florina, she's so cute, and especially fun to draw..I'm actually kind of glad your story was from Florina's view insted of Sain's...it gives a different perspective...

THANK YOU! You're the first to write a fic for us, and you have no idea how much we appreciate it. Thank you for dedicating the fic to us, we're honored. I know you said this was gonna be a one-shot, and it's a great one, but if you could continue, or write a multi-chap fic, eventually, that would be awesome. I don't mind that it was more florina-centered, if you're connected with Florina, go ahead and focus on her (as long as you keep her with Sain). Actually, the reason I wrote my Sain fic is very similar: I felt connected to Sain. In fact, my closest female friend even said he reminded her of me. Coincidentally, that friend reminds me of Florina. Once again, thank you, this fic was great, and I'll be looking forward to (hopefully) seeing more Sain-Florina action from you.

Well, I am becoming a fan of this pair too, though, I like Sain/Fiora the most. This was really good. They recruited you, how did they do that? Anyway, you did good...no Great.

Excellent! I find it incredibly difficult to convey everything I want to in the first person while writing, but this is incredible! My hat is off to you.

I fear I have no suggestions for improvement. Keep up the good work!