This was absolutely brilliant. You've captured their voices perfectly.

This is wonderful. I love it. It's got all the character nuances, and the scene's so believable, and the awkwardness is so...real. Great job with this!

*chuckles* I just ran across this little fic and I have to say, it's brilliant. So well in character and terribly amusing, kudos to you for doing such a great job. If you ever decide to write more for this little fandom, I'll be there to root you on :D!

Oh please, oh please, oh please. You can't just let that go without a sequal!

Honestly, that is the best Keen Eddie fanfic I have ever read. There is REALLY not enough from this genre, and even if there were tons to compare it to, this one would still stand out. It's amazing! So wonderful!

So you can't just let it end there! You should definitely write a sequal, or another chapter, or something! Something to get them together. _ Pwetty pwease?

Wow. That was really good. I don't find too many stories about Keen Eddie online, and most of those are bad, but this one was nice; funny too. I look forward to reading more of your work (possibly more along this line, HINT HINT) lol.