CONTINUE! CONTINUE! CONTINUE!

This is really good

o.O A bit strange... and gory... but interesting! XD

Plot-wise, this one felt a bit lightweight. The "pushing" of Hanabi is covered kind of in passing without much of a build-up, and then she goes off to slaughter everyone - equally easily, which breaks the suspension of disbelief as well as disturbing anyone attached to any of the characters - and ends up soon after smooching with Deidara.

It's common that even if one named Naruto character dies to advance the plot, people post big warnings to the summaries. In here, the deaths are just shrugged, and random talented shinobi are just lambs for the slaughter. Uh oh. Similarly the difference in skills, etc might be treated with an AU (alternate universe) warning, although I do think it's at its most needed when Konoha shinobi are placed in a regular highschool or some other cracked-up and alien setting.

I was wondering, is Hanabi wielding a full-length farmer's/Death's scythe or the kama hand "scythe" from Asia? It's a bit unclear from the story; I'd expect she's using a kama but due to being death incarnate the larger scythe would sort of make sense too.

In any case, thanks for these!

hon, you should continue this, i want to know what happens :) ohhh and i saw a relevance in hanabi's name with hannibal the canibal, anyway, continue the story!

Poor Hinata...

And Hanabi, in a way...

Stormy

Nice one hehehe who would have thought Hanabi had it in her to do that so effortlessly. Yeah my mind is a bit messed up but I knew that a hyugaa would 'pull an Itachi'. You may want to create a sequal because knowing Garra he will want revenge for killing his lover. I'd personally love to see that fight but as you said it is a ONESHOT but keep in mind you could put some twists in there and have fun about her and Deidara's relationship.

Favorited please keep my sugestions in mind.

-Charlotte

PLEASE CONTINUE! IT'S A GREAT STORY!

oh my gwd...you better continue it! i love the story line, so if you don't continue it...-_-... just update it...

tell me this is a crack fic..please tell me...

LEMON, LEMON, LEMON, LEMON please

i love the story

keep up the good work

i hope you continue

if you are

update soon please

I want to see Hanabi team up with Itachi and Kisame to go get Kyuubi out of Naruto.

*cackles* and then Gaara finds out his girlfriend got done in and goes on a murdering rampage. So between the two of them, they finish off the majority of the world's population. Oh yeah and they fight eachother. I think they'd be in a tie...

I find this story...interesting..but the characters are OOC. And maybe this is just because I don't know hanabi that much but I doubt that she would go around killing the whole Hyuuga clan. At least not that easily anyway. But anyway as said before I think this story is interesting so please continue

is it just me or does reading about a clan's demise make you all warm and fuzzy inside? I like the scythe thing very much. please continue this story It would be interesting. I wonder if Itachi is bitter about Hanabi copying him...good work anyway