Ahh. Sweet. But not OOC! Well, not very anyway. I really liked it.

I like it! It's interesting, it's intriguing, it's even a little heart warming. thanks.

just found this in the potions ad snitch comunity andwanted to let you know that I really enjoyed it!

Nice :)

This is an amazing story. Such an interesting premise too. Leaves me very curious what happened before, and after it!

Good story. I like how you wrote Snape. Still mean, but underneath he really cares.

This was a great story!

Beautifully done. You set the mood well, and your characterization is excellent. I really love the style of the dialogue, and the subtlest hint of caring on Snape's part, coupled with his biting sense of humor. Excellent.

"“Honestly, I do believe that even if you went outside right now, or hopped about madly in an open field begging to be struck dead, whatever gods may exist would spare you, if only to spite me.”
*FABULOUS* line! I can just *see* Snape's face!

I really like the way you write this story, especially the atmostphere you created with the rain and jazz music.

I was looking at your profile, and you say that you are caught up in details... but hey~ the details are what make your story different from most people's stories here in fanfiction... and well.. the big picture.. well, that's easier to get i suppose.. just uh.. zoom out a bit?

anyways, I'll get to the point. Did I say I really like your stories? I'm saying it now, lols. You make the characters really believable... tho this story, on the plot part is a bit lacking..

Hmm, I've never left a longer review.. guess I should go.. and wishing I could write as good as you.

~ Isabelle

I really like the way your Severus and Harry interact. I really would have liked to see more of this fic, there are so many things that could happen and many explanations are needed for what happened.

All in all though it is a great one-shot all the same. Please write more.

- Adena McGee

What a well written piece of work. I especially liked your imagery, it was very vivid and drew me in. Your Snape was fascinating, especially how he was still somewhat mean to Harry, but it had a duller edge to it. It was very obvious that they'd been through a lot together and understood each other more. I really liked the line, "Odd really, that the mark burned on both their arms would force the Potions Master to overlook the one James had left." That was a really interesting way to put it.

Great job, all around.

Wow, I feel warm and fuzzy inside ;)… This piece is really well written. I absolutely adore it! I’ll go look at your profile now… and see what other stories I can find. I hope there are plenty more.
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I like it! It was so cute and you're right, fluffy. Good work.

“Potter--" Like the hands, there was the tiniest hint of compassion and long-suffering in the stern voice. “Honestly, I do believe that even if you went outside right now, or hopped about madly in an open field begging to be struck dead, whatever gods may exist would spare you, if only to spite me.”

Ain't it true, though? Poor Sevi. *snickers*

Great! I love the way Snape and Harry interact. There are several fascinating ideas in this fic, like the Dark Mark, the jazz, and Harry's fear of storms. The last one isn't something I would have considered but now that you've presented it, it makes perfect sense. Wonderfully crafted fic.