 Ossifrage 2007-08-21 . chapter 3Aw. I'm not one for fluffy happy endings...but this somehow fits perfectly. XD
Great job! |
 lil kitsune 2007-08-14 . chapter 3 i luv this story! please keep writting more of ur wonderful fanfics!
best wishes from lil k. |
 Bitttersweet 2006-02-11 . chapter 3Yey, I'm so happy. At the end there I was wondering if they were ever going to tell each other! Lol, good story.
Bittersweet |
 Nayru 2005-12-27 . chapter 3 So cute ^^* I love the way how you make them express their feelings with words. Looking forward to the next chapie ^^ |
 Red Asatari 2005-11-05 . chapter 3oh this ccuople is just perfect. I really like you plot, nice fic |
 Princess-Aurion 2005-10-20 . chapter 1Dude!
I'm sorry this review is late! >.< But ZOMG! This fic rocks! It's so well done! and really cute! I love how you describe everything!
Truly superb buddy! I love it! *Claps* |
 mangy_mongrel 2005-09-27 . chapter 2 Oh crap. So sorry for spamming your reviews. just didn't want to accept my review of your chapter 3 and so I ended up hitting the submit button like ten times...
But just wanted to say again how lovely your story is, although there are some minor language usage problems that I find are a little odd. Not exactly disrupting the story, just... odd. |
 mangy_mongrel 2005-09-27 . chapter 3 Wow.
Lovely. Just... lovely. :) |
 wipedaccount 2005-09-25 . chapter 3That was so sweet! And you shouldn't feel bad if you take a while to update...infact now I feel bad because I haven't updated my fic in the time its taken you to do two chapters. Oh well, that was a really great story, I like that pairing.
Virgo |
 DayDrEaMiNg-child 2005-09-24 . chapter 3yayness! *claps* this was great once again! this is definetly goin to my faves list!
beautiful! absolutely wonderful! |
 MeeLee 2005-09-24 . chapter 3**Dies from fluff overload**
Awesome chapter. Your use of simile and metaphor was exceptional. I'm glad you put so much effort into writing this!
Half the time while reading this chapter, I just wanted to go, "Aww..." but I knew that would annoy the other people in the room. XD But this was a very well-written piece!
This is the last chapter, right? In that case, congrats on a wonderful story. ^_^
-MeeLee |
 Phantom of Spades 2005-09-24 . chapter 3Beautiful story. I totally loved it. HoroRen forever. Great job. |
 Yasmia 2005-09-23 . chapter 3That was an amazing third chapter. Although the pairing isn't a personal favourite, I'd read the other 2 chpaters so I thought I'd read this one too. I have to say it was really emotional and sweet.
Well Done. |
 shadowdragonlady 2005-09-23 . chapter 3 too lazy to log in...
feel teh luv i'm showering u in...! u good~... |
 Ad 2005-09-23 . chapter 3 Oh...my...gosh
This was soo sweet all the way through, you perfected Rens feeling's perfectly, you stayed in his character perfectly with his short answers, but when he got more and more involved witrh the person who he loves he opened up, conveying his feelings, you did this perfectly, use of language was fantastic and descriptions were spot on. While reading this, I was virtually in tears, and my stomach twisted, I was ill with how good this chapter (and fic) truly is. This sort of style of fic can only be written when having a hugh connection to the characters involved, this shows that you have an extremely close bond to Ren and thats where the flare of being able to write perfect fics like this comes from, your heart...
I loved it from start to finish, I cannot wait to read more of your RenXHoro fics, because if this one is anything to go by...then words do ot describe how truly awesome that the next fic will be!
Well Done Lysha, it was a pleasure and an honour to read it! ^^ |