A fun read! You captured the characters beautifully.

this is a very funny story, I hope you write more.

Well, did that take forever or what? I'm finally back, though it's been so long I believe an elf would be tired of waiting for me! In any case, we have off tomorrow, so be happy I'm reading now! ^_^
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"Asystole," Kerry announced, sounding suddenly tired. "Time of death, 11:48." She was suddenly aware of Coburn in the doorway. "Sorry, Janet.""Asystole," Kerry announced, sounding suddenly tired. "Time of death, 11:48." She was suddenly aware of Coburn in the doorway. "Sorry, Janet."
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I sincerely did not expect the man to die!! But I like how you have all of the medical terms. Score. ;-)
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Romano nodded and Coburn joined Jeanie and Kerry. "Hi," she said cheerfully.
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Eek! She found them!
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When she’d regained her composure, she felt able to continue. "One gang leader’s older brother came into the ER. His brother had died, see. He demanded to know who had ‘let’ his brother die. Steve tried to tell him – tried to explain his injuries were too bad." Janet was crying openly now. "Steve hadn’t even been treating his brother, but – but he pulled out a gun. He shot Steve, right in the chest, about six times. He didn’t stand a chance –" She couldn’t go on, and Robert took her in his arms until she could cry no more. "I’m just scared of it happening again, of getting too close…"
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That's actually really sad. I feel bad for her... :'(
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"Don’t be. I’m not going anywhere."
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And that was so sweet! Did that actually come from Romano? Impossible! It's still so hard to believe a human's under that skin... *somewhere*...

Great chapter! I won't waste any time on saying any more; let me go read the rest and FF willing I'll review!

good story i loved it.

That was very enjoyable! Bravo!

I can't beleive they came clean. That could've blown up in their faces!

Leave it to Doug to pretend to lose the ring! He can be such a jerk sometimes.

Thanks for the happy ending and everything tied up in a neat little bow.

OMG, hahahahahah!

update soon. i liked this chapter.

That was so sad! Wah! A baby's daddy dies, the poor mom has to raise the baby alone and Janet has this terrible story from her past...all in one angsty chapter!

You write sadness well! *goes off to find a tissue*

This is going well :) Keep it up

Wow! I never expected that! But do I foresee trouble? Is Doug going to get caught with the tape recorder?? *bites lip* No! This is to good to end!!

Wow. Romano in love. Wow. *still can't get over it*

Congratulations about winning the Ashes, mellon-nin! Don't know what they are, but congratulations! And now (it feels great to finally be able to say this...) UPDATE!

This is working out better than I expected!! Those two are falling head over heels!! Hehheh This is great!

This is really a great story. Update soon please.

this chapter was so funny. update soon.

This is a very romantic story! I didn't know you had it in you, dearie!

Well, the MVA part at the end put a damper on the romance, but hey, it's the ER isn't it?

AH! Bad picture! *closes eyes* IT'S IN THERE! Oh you are cruel, mellon-nin, cruel! You had better make this up to me! More funny chapters! And up until now, very, VERY good story! :D ^_^ :D