 eightofswordsfan 2007-10-23 . chapter 1 Hi, I don't if you know this already but eightofswords, lovely author of Subject to Change is updating on on JadeEye, you should go check it out. |
 Alex 2007-03-25 . chapter 3 I love stories like this lease get back soon and update! This is really interesting and i would love to read more. |
 LynGreenTea 2006-07-12 . chapter 3write more soon
real soon
write more |
 rogue2009 2006-07-11 . chapter 3OMG! if you do not put up another chapter soon i am going to be so mad. i love it so much you have sucha gift with words and its marvelous. i am going to start writing sailor moon fics but right now i have an x-men one i must focus on. you should check it out, but make sure to review. ^_^ anyways great job make sure to update. chow |
 rogue2009 2006-07-10 . chapter 1Wow! i really love the word usage and detail of your fanfic! i think you do a wonderful job at telling the story of Serena through your own words and mind. you have a gift, my only advice to you is to maybe shorten your chapters by a page or two so that the reader doesnt lose interest with such a long chapter. i myself find that i get weary when i am reading a long chapter. but all in all you did a sensational job. have you ever thought about writing on Fictionpress? anyways email me sometime and we can talk. Keep up the good work! |
 Caytlyn Rose 2006-07-10 . chapter 3*grumbles* More, more, more! I wanna see where everyone figures out who everyone is! I am thoroughly enjoying this and it's going on my alerts list! |
 Jessie 2006-07-10 . chapter 1 thankyoui'vve been lookign for one like this see i once read opne similar to this and where it was serena was smart abut the writign sucked they needed to reword it all but urs is so much better than i expected so realistic well that is er i mean its well worded |
 ffgirlmoonie 2005-09-16 . chapter 2..hehe...hope ya update soon! |
 Comet Moon 2005-09-13 . chapter 2Wow, this is a great one. Look forward egarly to more.
Ja ne |
 Silver Moonlight-81 2005-09-11 . chapter 2Hi!. I read your fic and I like it a lot, please continue I love to read more, bye. |
 sailor_Serena141 2005-09-11 . chapter 2 this is so good, its funny and i love it. please please update soon! |
 kaiba-queen 2005-09-10 . chapter 2This is a really fabulous story. I like the fact that you haven't made Sereb=na a complete lutz, like people usually do. The plot you have here is totallt 100% original, its refreshing. Please up-date soon. I also would like to put this fic in a C2, is that okay?
Keep writing! |