good. There were several grammer and spelling mistakes but it was a good story all the same.

this is a amazing story! please update soon!

This was good. I think the only mistakes I bothered to take notice of(hehe, sorry) were that you separated words instead of using conjunctions. e.g. you will, instead of you'll. It just bugged me a bit. other than that a few minor errors, but it was wonderful overall.

omgomgomg i lurv this fan fic! um... could u update soon? thnx~>0<

I coulda sworn this was the last chapter until you said it wasn't. Probably would've killed something if this had been the last chapter. (wretched cliffhanger)

Soo glad you updated. -rubs hands together- Hate cliffies but can't wait to see what you do next! XD

What on earth is going on? Update!

Good! Now please the mnext one...curiosity is very big over here!

so now sophie loves justin and lettie loves howl? I'm really confused here!

oh :) this is getting interesting. what'll happen next??

I HAVE WAITED 4 YEARS FOR THE CONTIINUATON OF YOU AWESOME STORY! WHEN AER YOU GOING TO FINISH?!?!?
that is all, you roc, bla, bla, blah, and all that good stuff.plz write the last few chapters (p.s. i hope lettie gets more customers, and plz e-mail me on how to upload my own story on here. i have two

I can't find anything really wrong with your story; in factI find it very intriguing. I new here, so I haven't been following your story long,(try the couple of hours it took me to load and read it) but I want to encourage you to keep up the good work! I Really want to know how this is going to end!

Hoping this works out well

love it, please continue! :3

Amazing so far!

i love this story
hope you update soon