|Reviews for Urbs: Onyx|
| Exiled-Away 12/8/05 . chapter 3
Very good story!
| Luc Star 12/8/05 . chapter 3
hey.. nice to see you're back. i missed this story. and this was an excellent chapter. i hate it when the villains think they are going to get away with it all. i personally can't wait to see how Amy's going to hit the dirt in the end. wow.. you really have all that stuff planned for the story. that's cool. i have the next two stories after Guardians at the Gates of Hell planned as well. that reminds me... you haven't been around to read chapters 4 and 6. please drop by when you get the chance to see how things are going. and don't forget to leave a review when you do go through it. i'd love to hear what you think of where the story is going. anyways... back to your latest chapter.. that part where Sara was kind of pleased to hear that she had kicked Buffy in the face... that was real funny. and that last paragraph where Amy was thinking of exploiting Buffy being on the brink... yeah.. i wanna see what she's going to try. you know.. i know you said you might not want to have Darkness into your story.. but i think Jackie will make an interesting competition for Amy. plus.. he's not THAT evil. think about how interesting the story will get with him around. it'll be like having Angel in the story.. you know.. with the curse of the Darkness and all, just that he'll be 260 years younger. hehe. take care... keep the chapters coming.
| Luc Star 10/2/05 . chapter 2
hey.. great chapter.. very well written. you know.. that thing about Darkness making a cameo and probably a future role.. i'm a little dissapointed that he may not be showing up in later chapters.. but hell... it sure would have been exciting to say the least. i loved all the Darkness/Witchblade crossovers that have come out over the years. and what about Ian Nottingham... would have been cool to have him helping out Sara. you know.. if you hadn't paired her up with Giles.. i definitely would've paired her up with Ian. the guy can catch bullets man.. how cool do you think those two could have been.? heh-heh. well.. see.. this is why i love reading fanfictions. so many possibilities. i'm glad that you already have a plan for what's going to happen in the future. but i really wouldn't mind seeing a few characters from either the Witchblade or Buffyverse making appearances to make the lives of our heroes a little interesting. take care and keep up the great work.
ps. i'm not sure if i've told you this but i myself am working on a buffy/x-men evolution crossover. so far i've gotten some excellent reviews and i was hoping if you'd mind checking it out. i would love to hear your thoughts on it.
| Luc Star 9/10/05 . chapter 1
dude... Jackie? as in Jackie Estacado? woho... please tell me its The Darkness man.. cause i think its about time some of the top characters from TopCow starting showing their faces in your stories.. hehe. u know.. i'm not sure if i mentioned this before but having read a lot of Witchblade/Darkness crossovers, i was really hoping for the Darkness to lend Sara a hand in dealing with Amy... especially since they had worked together very well on times. anyways... whatever you got planned for him... i personally can't wait to read it. umm.. think our dear Mr Al Simons, AKA Spawn was going to show his face... well.. ok.. i'm making too many wishes at the moment.. but hey... what can i say... you're story's got me hooked. take care man and keep up the great work.