OMG that was brilliant! a really gd story line if i do say so myself! and ur only 16 my age! i could never of come up with any thin so imaginative and excellent as that. well done for it! wb im lookin forward to the next chapters! wb steph x

This was a really great story but I didn't like the part about Catherine being pregant with Warrick's baby. I love Cath and Warrick as a couple but not with baby. That just doesn't seem right to me.

I like your story but please, before you write another story consult a dictionary. It's treace not terse, took me awhile to figure that one out, and now is not spelled know. There were more but I'm not going to list them all. It makes reading your work hard. Grammar is easy to fix. USE A DICTIONARY!

that story was so good although everytime you meant to say now you had know & a couple of small errors like confusing to & too it was absolutly brilliant keep up the good work

I liked the story... Not much more to say

It's very good story. keep with a good work.

I'm portuguese. :-)

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