You realise that no one actually bothers to read these things
I actually read the beginning and I got ** that you were trying to ransom/murder Kagome.You probably aren't going to get reviews after this.If you do...good for you.This is not an offensive letter,but it's one to tell you that no one likes the stories when people add their own characters or themselves.-_-
It's very boring.The only good thing was the grammar.Thank god for the grammar,or I wouldn't have even replied to this story.