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| prudence dear 2008-07-09 ch 13,  | abuseWow, that was great. Well written, cute, angsty, just a little smut and a lovely ending, pretty much everything I was hoping for :) Cheers, -Pru |
| Uberscribbler 2008-05-15 ch 13, | abuseAnd so it ends as it began: quietly, without fanfare, and with not considerable dignity. Could have been worse, mind. That said an extra chapter or three (or fifty) would not be unwelcome. I've no doubt both Kara and Lee will have a considerable amount of adjusting to do now. Doubtless that will be no less amusing as the coloring scene. Good story and good writing throughout. Well done. |
| Zommbie1 2008-05-15 ch 13, | abuseI found this story a few weeks ago and loved it. I read your note about wanting to write a chapter about them interacting with Hannah but noting the date on the story I didn't think it would happen. I was so happy when I noticed yesterday that you had posted another chapter. You should definitely keep the muse. This is such a cute chapter. Also I would love a fluffy bonus chapter. I am a sucker for domestic parent pilots :D |
| xan-merrick 2008-05-15 ch 13, | abusegreat story i didn't think you'd ever finish it i'd love to know what happens to them in the future |
| Artemis90 2008-05-14 ch 13, | abuseGreat Ending! I hope to see an epilogue of the new family in this AU-niverse (different Season 2.5!) |
| time16 2008-05-14 ch 13, anon. | abuseHey. I just read this story and I think you had done a really good work. Hope you will post a bonus chapter. |
| AdrinaFairy 2008-05-14 ch 13, | abuseHave just read this for the first time and i loved it! please can we have an extra chappie? pretty please? |
| moira4eku 2008-05-14 ch 13, | abuseI'm so glad that you finished this story. This was one of my favorites and I was excited to see it posted. It made me tear up a bit. I imagine that Hannah will be a handful! |
| Scorpio 2008-05-14 ch 13, anon. | abuseLove this story. So glad you are working on it again. |
| Aleja21 2008-05-14 ch 13, | abuseLoved this chap and would love a look in to their future. :) |
| chicagobelle 2007-07-18 ch 12, | abuseAwesome, looking forward to the final chapter ;-) |
| cherylad 2007-06-18 ch 12, | abuseI just discovered this story and read it quickly! I really enjoy the concept and can't wait to see what you do with it next. There IS a next right? I know you've been writing Guardian, so now you REALLY have me on the edge of my seat! Thanks! |
| gibgirl4 2007-03-30 ch 12, | abuseAwesome Job! Can't wait for the next! |
| starbuck042786 2007-02-22 ch 11, | abuseGreat chapter. It was very nicely done. Im excited for the next one where we actually get to meet Hannah! |
| pilotlover 2007-02-15 ch 11, | abuseOh my Gods. An entire chapter of pilot **...sque. Seriously. The pretties are so hot. And what erm, stamina they got, lol. Well, maybe Papadama will get his dream blonde pig-tailed grandchild afterall. So I wonder if they're going to teach Hannah to call them Mommy & Daddy or just Aunt & Uncle? Thanks so much for a very smutty chapter. Waits for the next. Marilyn |