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| Kirsta Isabella 2008-09-15 ch 11,  | abuseWow! This is great! I have to guess each time! Plus, this is hilarious! Update soon! Thanks! Kirsta Isabella P.S. Who is Valentine? |
| lallyzippo 2007-07-08 ch 11, | abuseEheehe... Very cool, very cool. Keep it up. |
| shadisparrow 2007-07-08 ch 11, | abusehaha, that was a really cute chappy. i never liked Ian much before but i love the way you write him. if you are taking suggestions how about tyson next? i wanna see how much he's enjoying this... |
| shadisparrow 2006-12-09 ch 10, | abuseHey! I'm sorry for not reviewing earlier, we moved and I don't have the net yet. Well, I like that Johnny is trying to be macho and immature but still managing to be somewhat mature in the end. This makes his character seem quite complex (which is a good thing). Nice chappy! Next... I dunno, one of the Bladebreakers would be nice ^_^ |
| whyamidoingthis01 2006-10-15 ch 10, | abuseCan you do a chapter on Lee? I want to see how he feels about cheating, plus, I really want Lee and Bryan to get into a fight, lol, I look forward to your next chapter! -Why... |
| The Great Hippo Theif 2006-10-11 ch 10, anon. | abusethe bastards! putting those bloody onions in everything. yays on the update. Can you please do when Kai or Michael snap and have a go at each other? (I love fights..just goes to show that they are right about video games and the youth of today being desensitized) |
| loner7803 2006-10-10 ch 10, | abuseUm...you could do Kai or maybe Ian. Hey I know, why not do one of Rei? Well, anyway, nice story though I can't help but to imagine the fight. Maybe you can do a side story for that? Just an idea. |
| DarkShadow411 2006-10-10 ch 10, | abuseYEA! update son! ...who's gonna be in the next one...just curious lol |
| DarkShadow411 2006-10-10 ch 8, | abuseOkay I've read chaps 1-8 and I wanted to wait 'till chap ten before I reviewed but I think I will die if I don't do it sooner! This fic is freakin awesome! It's whicked funny and I love how you did the diary entries. Okay now that I'm done I'm gonna read 9 and ten...oh...I guess I could have waited lol. I am so weird...well update soon...BYE =^_^= -DS411- |
| The Great Hippo Thief 2006-09-30 ch 9, | abuseI'm a very nice person and shall review because I've just discovered this story! I'm not too sure who it is in this chapter though... update soon. please! |
| shadisparrow 2006-06-14 ch 9, | abuseE! I dunno what that was about... but I liked this chapter, too! I love how you wrote Bryan, it seems just like him. Plus his logic makes perfect sense. The other teams should treat them better. Oh well, what's done is done. Update soon! |
| shadisparrow 2006-06-14 ch 8, | abuseSOO sorry I didn't read this chappie earlier! But here's my review: I liked it, as always, though I think it could have had a little more humor. I'd like to see Tala and Johnny's fight from one of their points of view, too. Good work, and I'm about to go and read the next chappie! |
| sashary 2006-05-22 ch 9, | abuse*wonder why she hadn't reviewed* I luv this fic keep up the good work ^^ |
| shadisparrow 2006-04-23 ch 7, | abuseHey, sorry for not reviewing earlier, my computer was broken... but nice chappy! It was nice to have a longer one, and I liked the tension in it. Why not write the next one from Bryan's pov? He might write more than he speaks... Update soon! |
| bluerosety 2006-04-08 ch 7, | abuseGreat chapter (both)! I can't wait for more, and the fights! ^_^ |