 Alithea 2009-02-05 . chapter 1See, there you go again. You write something like this and I'm an impossibly giddy reader. This is such a nice touch of connecting two characters that no one else would bother to connect. And it works so well. "We tried to corrupt him." Ah, I love it. Sometimes I don't feel I do you justice enough when I find some of your fiction late in the game, or when I notice I failed to comment on a piece I've read and loved. But geez, i guess it doesn't matter the timing so much. Your dialouge is nice, everyone is in character, and I can picture that odd military disco-bar perfectly. Well done. |