Ahahaha... I have a correction to make to that review I left. I was off by a few zeros, actually a little less than six hundred USD would be somewhere around 60,0 yen, not 6 million. ^_^;; My bad, sorry.

You know, I don't read much of straight pairings anymore (XD you can blame my tendency to write boys together for that) but that was really rather sweet. I did notice some odd things (like at one point there was a 'z100' sitting before Marth's name) but that's probably just a matter of some loose coding or something like that.

I was about to make a comment concerning some people's belief in the interchangeability of the terms 'ludicrous' and 'ridiculous', but I think that was the right word after all, especially when concerning paying the bill at the overpriced Italian bistro. XD I mean, if the price was laughable due to its sheer absurdity, by all means... huzzah! XD Although one would think that a normal person would cry upon having to pay that much for one meal--and just under six hundred US dollars probably means just about (if not over) six million yen. Yikes. XD

Anyway, that was a rather cute read. I think I skimmed through this before, so I don't know why I haven't left a review yet (you can smack me for being lazy, ahahaha... ^_^;; ) Anyway, kudos. Nicely done. :D

-Hikaru.

P.S. Thank you, thank you, thank you for leaving so many lovely literate reviews. :D Hope that last reply I sent didn't scare you away, ahahaha. ^_^;;

nice story,but zelda and link go together.Marth has his little sheeda.marth=lightningrod for bashing.Link=hot,sexy guy pefect for Zelda.rather odvious,no?^^

*files under every Alert* Incredibly astounding. Each chapter was filled with vibrant descriptions, emotions and breathtaking plot developments. Zelda's desire to stay within a passionate realm of love with Marth brought me to tears. Each entry is a poignant, ethereal work of art-I look forward to more! *army puts out searchlights* All of that is true-I am not praising this because you're an ardent supporter of 'Animus'. This is a phenomenal masterpiece!

Thank you for being such an enthusiastic reviewer of mine! I hope you continue to enjoy 'Animus', and please continue with your own projects! I will eagerly EAT the next chapter! *army sets out placemats*

Nicely done, as always. You have an eloquent writing style that's very enjoyable to read.

You really should give humor a try; it's not that hard. If my humor doesn't make people bleed from all orifices, then yours probably won't either.

Breathtaking! Absolutely beautiful on so many levels... your style and characterizations are wonderfully unique and expressive! The Hylian and Altean traditions and superstitions were also creative and fitting; excellent work! I also enjoyed the song! I thought it was rather amusing, actually! Anyhoo... I anxiously await more of your terrific fic! Thanks for the great read thus far!

Yeah, new chapter. Link's role was shocking, but highly amusing! I am perhaps speaking for myself, but that was a rare rendition of him. Poor Zelda, one can only commiserate. I really liked the Altean and Hylian superstitions you created and included - they brought a richness to the story and Zelda's feeling. Though it came after the chapter ended, I found the quote by Antoine de Saint-Exuperey to be highly enjoyable. It's wonderfully germane, not only to this fiction, but to others that linger in the imagination. I think I'll write it down!

I'm touched you like my reviews!... though, is having a flatter-gun commendable? (XD) Oh yes, and I'm a girl. 'Tis the name! ;)

Your descriptions and characterizations are mind-bogglingly gorgeous. Your style is unique, well-developed, and excellent as well. You're an amazing write; I think you've got something here, dear. Outstanding work as usual!

coliloveitiknowyoudonthatelinkdomore(dies like kenny)help(continues dying like kenny)

Aww, how cute! I really liked the ending... you just had such a brilliant way of ending it; cliffhanger and cuteness! You also describe everything with such detail and emotion, it really provides a sense of substance to each of the sentences. Anyhoo... I'm really enjoying so far, and you absolutely must continue soon! Thanks!

Aw, cute chapter! ^^ Excellent job, as usual.

Ah, a new chapter! It seems I shall be obliged to add this to my story alert, for the sheer love of your meritorious composition. ;) But truly, this is a well-written fic, and very enjoyable. The onset of this installment was spectacular; I have a particular penchant for celestial details, as those which you included in the first paragraph. The entire scene, from the act of stargazing to the amorous conclusion, was enchanting... though, I must own I found Zelda's irreverence to be somewhat mordant.

But anyhow, I shall be looking forward to an update!

As far as I can recall, this is the first Marth/Zelda fiction I've read. And this is, without a doubt, the best fan-fiction I've read yet. Every facet of this one-shot is beyond excellence, and your style of writing is crisp and beautiful. Your representation of Marth and Zelda is consummate, as is your quiet, general depiction of the Smasher world. My favourite detail in this most laudable milieu was the paragraph about the Italian bistro. I admire the precision, and detail. Excellent work!

I see! I do come to for writing. The fun of fanfiction is to see your favorite characters in other situations than their norm. I'm sorry, I just thought that reading a fanfic from something I've never even heard of would have me deeply confused, and I would feel stupid if I reviewed it and said, "Umm... that was good, I guess..." seeing as how I have no idea if this would be an accurate representation of the characters, scenerios, and situations involved with this category. Well, now I can review, then, eh? Sorry it took me so long to review this, too. It's school! Stupid school has been taking up all my time lately... yes, now away from my excuses and onto the review.
Yet another brilliantly written, thoroughly descriptive, very imaginative fic! My gosh, you have so much talent! There are just too many things to praise here. Everything is too wonderful for words. The descriptions, the emotions, the imagery, the dialogue, the style... everything about it is just fantastic! "Excellent" is an understatement. And, it's nice to see another Marth/Zelda pairing, for those are very rare on for some reason. If you were to do a Part 2, it would be very much enjoyed! Hee hee! Thanks!

Another MarthZelda, eh? ^_^

Again, beautiful descriptions. Overall: Awesome!