it's a good poem

I love this piece. It is really deep and touching. You are right that God's love for us is something that we need to hold close to our hearts to help us through tough times, and that we often don't realise that until after it would have helped us most. This poem shows that the writing with the most truth in it is the writing that comes from our own personal experiences and pain. I hope that you are doing well for yourself now. Keep writing and God bless you.

Beautiful thoughts.

"And I knew that on that day long ago I had lost one friend but two..."

I love the way you expressed that. Very moving and so true...
Very nice work.

There is no God, and you should be in therapy.

thats an AWESOME poem...i can really feel your pain and of course God's love... good job and keep it up =)

That was brilliant! You made me cry and yet understand how deep God's love is for all of us. Thanks for sharing your testimony.

You are such a good poet. I love god and Jesus so much. May peace live in your heart.