Nice chapter. I was surprised at 12 years passing but it's a good way to get Ranma to high mage level and start a relationship between him and Kasumi. It would have been interesting to read about some of their adventures but I get that's not the focus of this story.

I like that though Ranma is training in a different Art he hasn't forgotten his first one. The fight between Ranma and Genma shows the improvement in sheer skill even if it's not quite enough to overcome Genma's power.

good story would like to see fully revived, maybe a little back story of their time away

:D

me like.

This is an outstanding story, and I'm seriously looking forward to seeing more of it.

Coup de Vitesse, AFAIK, is David Weber's version of Musubetsu Kakutou Ryuu.
I haven't asked him about it, but I plan to. You can too: at Baen's Bar.
/bar

I'ii be honest, this review isn't for 'Pretty Magicial Girl Ranma!', although(sp?) it is a great story and I'm definately looking forward to seeing where things go from here.

What I wanted to comment on is 'Life and Times'. (I think I have an e-mail account but I never axcess it and have no clue what my screen name or password are) Anyway, I've never read a Naruto/Sailor Moon x-over before but if this excerpt(sp?) is any indication of what you have both for the rest of the chapter and the story itself then I can garuntee(sp?) you that you'll definately have at least one avid reader. Because I thought what you've written so far is great. Especially putting the fear of Pluto in Kyuubi.

Sorry, but this chapter just felt weak. Hopefully it's because it's a set up chapter, but while a few things happened, I just didn't get a feel of development in this.

That may be the massive crossover element. Meh. Still, there just are some thing that feel rushed, like gems. Note the lack of j.

Still, looking forward to the next chapter when things start getting involved.

I didn't think that there would ever be a new chapter for this. Thank you for working on it again! Does this mean it's back from the grave?

“After all, those things only come by every seventy-five years or so.”

"What happened to the 'Anything Goes' part, Daddy?"

LOL

Amusing old read. Thanks.

I think I've said this before, but you're bloody brilliant. I have nothing constructive to say.

great, another chapter ^.^; i didn't even remember this story, but i'm glad you didn't droped it, is really a fun story, i just hope you don't take 3 years from the next chapter ^-^. please update and keep the great work with this and your other storys ^o^

Aww. I always love it when Ranma and Ryoga develop a real friendship. They are both such decent, but flawed, young men. Very entertaining chapter. Were it up to me to decide which of your stories you would work the hardest on, this would be it.

There was a lot I liked in chapter one, but it seems like all the real conflict, drama, and action of your story takes place in the vast gap of missing time between end of the first chapter and the start of the second chapter. Chapters 2 & 3 feel as though they're the wrap-up of a story that I haven't even read yet.

If you're looking for something to do with this story other than let it die, then might I suggest cutting the last two chapters and focusing your great creative tallents on delving into that strange training trip.

We know who your characters are in chapter one, and we know what they become in chapter two. The part I want to see is the process that changed them.

Wo! Both curses at once! Go Kasumi. Ah, Ryoga finally gets a break. That's nice to see. Course, I could be just slightly biased...Maybe. Excellent work on this chapter though. Akane's not my favorite character, but hopefully she can find some manner of stability soon.

Hm... It's a really fun read, even if it is one of the biggest Ranma fanfic cliches. The only part that took me out of it was the section with Ryoga at the end of chapter 3.

Having said that, I've got a little nitpick. I've noticed that you seem to misspell Nodoka's name as Nadoka pretty frequently in this and other stories. You might want to check that you didn't accidentally add the incorrect spelling to your Word dictionary, I did the same thing once.

this is a great story. you have to continue it. becuase we all have to know how everything turns out with the amazons and with Ukyo. Also what will happen with kasumi's and ranma's
everyday life. please write more on this story.

your fan

7Winds ;)