very nice

OMG She married him! Great ending!

I thought the third story was coming out?!?! WHERE IS IT!?!?!

I was wondering, how old are Kimiko, Jack, and Chloe in this story and how many years has passed ever since the war? Great story!

I gues I could have wrote more last time cuz my mom kiked me off cuz she thought my step-dad was done with my bed but he's not done building it yet so I can stay on Yay!

sry I can't say much on this one parents are making me get off good story though!!

"sniff" this chapter is kinda sad. great story!!


I almost had aa first story cuz my friend digiwildfire made two chpters to a story but thought that the story was stupid but I thought it was pretty good so she said i could finish it and post it but then she spilled soup on it so that isn't happining

see this chapter is a chapter I like. not to be mean but I didn't really like that last one.



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I would say yay but right now I'm kinda creeped out from this chapter. and I mean that in the nicest way possible.

Monkey. this at least kind of looks like a monkey unlike the bunny

Great story! the previous chapter was kinda creepy though

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Bunny. It's kinda hard to see at first but it's a Bunny



Great story!!

See I don't Know how you people come up with this stuff!!





P.S
I think you're my favorite author so far GREAT STORY!

yay!! (If you havent noticed I like to say yay a lot) this story Just getsbetter and Better! I have raed lots of storys but I think this and "in Jacks clutches" are the best storys that I have ever read (probably because it has my favorite paring JackXKim)

I really like you're storys I don't know were you and everybody else gets ideas like this. good Job on the story so far!!

Yay!! I like this story already cause I read the first one and if you're wondering I'm Echo I finally got an account I didn't have one when I read the first one wich was an awesome story by the way.