I LOVE IT! It is so in character!

Wow I think that's the first time I've read this one! @_@; How'd I miss it? Ah well ... Gojyo's antics absolutely killed me amusement. WOW. Naturally your first lemon would be 35, wouldn't it? :P I think it's rather interesting to see you keep a continuous style of 'banter-type' speech for these two in the bedroom for the BB thread, since it's certainly a possibility for Sanzo to relax a little more around Gojyo when he's playing the part of 'Sanzo's lover'.

"Dakara nanda" amused me because it fit so well in there. The mocking use of 'yare yare' was hysterical, and there's that pesky "Suki desu" again. :P

Overall, highly entertaining. :) Gojyo certainly does love to play with fire. ;D
~Shin-no-Nekochan >|< >o+

I loved this. I like to think of your Gojyo and Sanzo in this story as how they would be after being in a relationship for a while. Being that intimate with someone for so long DOES change you. Open you up.

Anyway, I LOVED that "Me too." in the end! Gyah, I love Sanzo!

Kato-chan

the smut is nice, and I dig that Sanzo's on top. The characters are a bit off, though, the pet names and the mushiness really don't seem like them at all. The wrecked book was amusing though.

Oh my this story is especially dedicated to me...WOO HOO! ^__^ I got a lemon I got a lemon! Thanks! =^-^=
With that aside I must say that this story was great! Very funny in some parts and very very, um for lake of a better word, hot (I just love it when Sanzo's on top ~_^). Those two are like two lil rabbits; they just don't know when to quit. ^-^
So you say this was the tamer version...hmm I might have to go check out the original. XD Oh and there is no need to be blushing, because there is nothing wrong with writing stuff like this...*shakes head* nope absoulty nothing. *evil grin* >XP Besides you're very good at it.
Keep up the good work and remember you -must- write more of these. ~_^